The second novel ended, and I was relieved and a little regretful.

This book expressed my great hope, but was killed by the editor three times before the book was opened, but all of them were as expected. The original fan transformation was basically the problems encountered, and I was mentally prepared.

Even if you write the framework perfectly or the setting outline is smooth, it may not be able to be implemented. As it turns out, I can no longer control it in the later stage.

Fortunately, the Squid Live answered me half a month ago. I asked how to solve the power system in the later stage. He also said that no more than five people could stabilize the fight scenes in the later stage of the full-time starting point.

He suggested that the best way is to weaken the ceiling and reduce the fight plot.

I felt at ease in an instant. Even the great platinum god may not write well. Moreover, I read the squid's books, and the ceiling of the power system is lower than that of each one.

Later, I asked the editor and the author friends, and they all said that this is a common problem in the flow of heaven. Most of the writing involves time and space are not satisfactory, and there are too many bugs, so they basically turn into the mastermind behind the scenes.

So, when I wrote about Daluo Palace, Daluo, the book was completed immediately.

These are all pitfalls I have stepped on, so I will correct them in the next book.

Having said that, when looking back on the whole book, I think the outline is still complete, and I basically finished it according to the main line, although many world contents are extremely broadly omitted.

But there is no way. The second part of the circulating problems in the heavens is that their strength reaches a certain level. When they go to other worlds, they naturally stand at a very high level. As the saying goes, if they stand too high, they will not be able to see the scenery below.

The world is well-infused, and it starts with the filling of the underlying details.

It is still the lord of mystery, with the power system and profession linked. Even extraordinary people have to integrate into society. This is very good. Let’s consider writing stories about people in the next book, and immortal cultivators also have various troubles.

In addition, there are all kinds of other problems. The biggest problem is the deviation between rhythm and expectation, which complement each other.

The issue of rhythm, you should feel that the first world, Daqin, was completed in just a dozen chapters. The main point of expectation for readers is in the weird fairy system, and the rhythm sense is also the fast-flowing rhythm.

The flaws soon came. The second world emperor Han wrote long and smelly. I hoped to transform from the weird immortal system to the soul system of emperor Han. The bull's head was wrong.

(So ​​some readers say they like the weird immortals of the Great Qin Dynasty, and some readers say they like the Taoist priests of the Emperor Han more, because the expectations of the two worlds are completely different, and the corresponding reader groups are also very different.)

This has laid a hidden danger for the collapse of my novel, but it happened before and after it was put on the shelves. That period was too difficult. Most authors’ law is that it will only rise but not fall.

And the increase usually doubles, and even the difference is even more. However, I have an unprecedented plunge, from 800 to 600.

According to the rules, this book has been sentenced to death, but I am still persisting, maybe I am unwilling to accept it, that is, I ushered in a turning point in April.

Many new readers have come in succession, including a leader [A gentleman is like a rosy in a feathered clothes show off], two helmsman [ME Yang], and [Harmony with Taoism], thank you very much.

Let me revive myself and muster up the courage to go on.

However, at this time the rhythm problem reappeared. It was about the period of the Changsheng and Ghost Realm. The pace was too fast. I was a little overcorrected and stepped on the accelerator and rushed to the end.

In fact, this rhythm is also wrong. The price is that the lifespan of this book has been shortened. It was originally completed by 1.5 million words at the rhythm, but now it has completed by 800,000 words.

Overall, the fast, slow, and fast are obviously very irregular. The rhythm of a normal book will fluctuate, but the fluctuation should not be too large, and it should be detailed and appropriate.

The misalignment of expectation is also the reason why this book is not pleasant enough. Secondly, some words are too mysterious and give readers unnecessary burdens.

In short, there are many problems, but after all, they are still newcomers and have no great experience.

I gradually realized these things until I wrote them almost finished, and I didn't feel them at all before.

Fortunately, this book has few poisonous points. As expected, I avoided the emotional line and interpersonal communication, so I didn't have poisonous points, but it brought about the protagonist's character very thin.

So for the next book, I plan to try new things and write more about the characters interacting with the protagonist.

As for the subject type, I haven't figured it out yet, and now my mind is blank. I'll let me rest for a few days and read another ten or half a month novel, and maybe I'll be reinspiring.

Any good suggestions you have is to make.

Finally, I really thank you for your support. I know that every paying reader is actually an investor. It’s not a joke. I am also chasing books. The eunuch’s senses are clear.
Chapter completed!