This is a post I saw on the forum. I think it represents the opinions of many readers now, because it has been posted twice in the same forum...

First of all, there is the original text of Jianjun, followed by my reply. Maybe the words are a bit casual, please include them more, but what I said to Jianjun is also an answer to many readers who hold the same view. If you have any questions, go to my words to find the answers, and I will not reply one by one.

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We Are the Champion's biggest defeat in history

The poster of the main post: [Sword Lord Twelve Hate] 2005-9-2021:49:03 Reply Edit

"Champion" writes chapter 196. Although Zhang Jun has come out of the trough and although Florence has hope of resurrection, it still cannot hide its biggest failure - Ren Yudi suddenly acquired Florence as the boss of Rez Group (the following is Florence replaced).

Below I will explain the reasons why it is a failure from three aspects.

First of all, from the pure novel writing, the sudden appearance of Ren Yudi (the following is replaced by "sudden appearance") is a plot pile.

Let's review the full text of "Champion" to make an analogy. In the Netherlands, Zhang Jun suffered a left foot injury and relapsed in Florida's foot injury; in the Netherlands, Feng Qing appeared to cure Zhang Jun, and the second time it was Feng Qing's appearance to bring a turning point for Zhang Jun; in Milan, Zhang Jun had a conflict with the head coach, lost his main position, and even had few chances to play, while in Florida, he still had conflicts with the head coach, and he didn't even have a chance to play; in Milan, Zhang Jun broke out, laying the foundation for Milan's championship, while in Florida, he was still the last round of the game, Zhang Jun broke out and made a move.

The club was successful in relegation. Perhaps some readers think this is just a coincidence. Let’s take a look at China’s football reform and Florida’s reform (if the Great Purge is also regarded as a reform). In China, Qiu Suhui was successful because he had a high official support for him. In the same sentence, Zhang Jun was successful because he had a rich man on his head to helm him. It is not difficult to see that not only Zhang Jun’s setbacks were almost the same, but Zhang Jun’s success factor was almost the same. Is this just a coincidence?

We can see the plot of similarity once or twice, or even the third time, as if it were a coincidence, but so many similarities are no longer a coincidence, it can be said to be a pile of plots. Excessive piles greatly reduce the ideological and readability of the entire novel.

Secondly, from the author's writing intention, "expanding" is a plot that the author puts on in a rigid way to realize his "bold words".

In the article "Interpretation of the debate on Zhang Jun's stay or leave for the work", Lin Da said: "Why can't Florence change? Why can't it grow into a team that is capable of AC Milan, Juventus, and Inter Milan in the next seven or eight years? The outline is in my hands, why do you insist that Florence has no future? Why must people grow in a very good environment? Little do you know that the sword is sharpened and the fragrance of plum blossoms comes from the bitter cold? The story of a wealthy family who became a superstar in a wealthy team, and a story of growing up step by step from a small club (in fact, Fiorentina is far less humble than some people say) and leading the team to great success. Which one is more attractive? That one is closer to legend? Let readers judge for themselves, which story they like to read."

The above is Lin Da’s original words. Lin Da once said that he is a Real Madrid fan, but according to my analysis of the article "Champion", I think Lin Da should be a Fiorentian fan. Zhang Jun’s words "I was born in Fiorentina, but died in Fiorentina's dead" should be a portrayal of Lin Da. According to the situation in the previous article of the novel: there is no chance to play at all, conflict with the coach, the club punishes continuously, and even the chairman is dissatisfied - although he is still a hero who has successfully upgraded and relegated; and corresponding to the outside world's situation

Moreover, many clubs are optimistic, and their mentor Basten has sent olive branches. In this case, what will you choose to put yourself in Zhang Jun’s position? Don’t tell me that you should establish a good interpersonal relationship and be stable and united! But if Zhang Jun really leaves, how can you realize Linda’s ideal of “Florida”? Therefore, in order to give Zhang Jun a reason to leave, Linda sacrificed Ren Yu’s magic weapon and let him play the friendship card. A friend is willing to lose all his money for you. How can you Zhang Jun leave?

It can be said that it was the rigidity of the writing purpose that caused Ren Yudi to "airborne" Florida, and the reasons for Zhang Jun's "left" above made this "airborne" look pale. Why did it say it was pale? Didn't Bati teach Zhang Jun to mature by example? Now he used a "Long Live Friendship" to let Zhang Jun and Ren Yudi play real-life CM. Isn't this inconsistency?

Finally, from an economics point of view, Ren Yudi and his Rez company cannot appear.

According to the book, Rez should be Ren Yudi's private enterprise, and not a listed company. Otherwise, the directors of the company would never let Ren Yudi burn a lot of money like this. Didn't Ren Yudi also say: "I earned all of this money myself and it has nothing to do with them. I want to invest in football now." Moreover, if it is a listed company, Ren Yudi can be a completely invisible person behind the scenes? The author of urban YY novels said that they are definitely the author of the Urban YY novel. Do you think the reporters and editors of the Wall Street Times and Time Magazine are idiots? I will only give an example. Sina is listed in the United States, and at the beginning of this year there were rumors that Shanda was going to acquire Sina. The Wall Street Times has made continuous follow-up reports. Those who are interested can look at the newspapers in February today. These are related to the direction of investment. Those reporters are better than the dog team. So if Rez is a listed company, Ren Yudi's acquisition of Rez will never have been buried for so long.

Ren Yudi's personal assets are 1.8 billion euros, and the Florida club is about 2 billion. It should be 2.5 billion US dollars. He developed in Hong Kong for a while, so it would take only 4 years to develop Rez. The four fastest ways to accumulate capital are: original capital accumulation, monopoly plus market financing, and state capital intervention. Ren Yudi does not have the first three methods, so according to the capital accumulation theory, his capital accumulation speed is about 1/4 of the above three situations, and in the first five years, its speed is about 1/8-1/6 of the above three methods. Let's take Microsoft founder Bill Gates as an example.

His total personal assets are about 44 billion US dollars. According to Microsoft's release of Dos in 1985, in 20 years, his asset growth rate is about 2.2 billion US dollars/year (the actual algorithm should be multiplied by the initial investment by (1+ growth rate), but the market capacity must be considered. Therefore, this method is too complicated. According to the probability theory, the statistical mean can also be used instead to obtain an approximation). According to the largest 1/6, Ren Yudi's asset growth rate is at most US$360 million US dollars/year, and according to the novel, it is $625 million US dollars/year, which is much more than the theoretical value. Could it be that Ren Yudi is more genius than Uncle Gates?

I heard that Lin Da also has a Mufang Group. Before posting, I will ask all Mufangs to take a look first. I don’t know why there is such a big loophole, but no one has raised it. Could it be that those Mufangs are just fans and know nothing about the rest, or is it just to see the latest chapter in advance, without doing their best, or is Lin Da insisting on doing his own thing? It’s really confusing!

However, there is also an advantage in writing this way, that is, Zhang Jun’s future journey should be smooth. Think about it, there is Ren Yu on his head and the wind and green on his feet to open the way. If Zhang Jun doesn’t show his power, he will just find a piece of tofu and hit him to death. After writing this, he will think about it. Could it be that Lin Da lacks comprehensive considerations to end the article "Champion" quickly?—

Sword Lord Twelve Hate Revised on 2005-9-2113:50:12—

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My reply:

Reply to the 33rd Floor: [Lin Haitingtao] 2005-9-2114:56:01 Reply Edit

==Reply to the main post==>>I am a person from Florence in life, and I am a person from Florence in death

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How can this mean that I am a Fiorentina fan? I am a Real Madrid fan who is fake. I even participated in Real Madrid's matches in CCTV's wealthy club week. Why don't I participate in Milan? It was once rumored online that I am a fan of AC Milan. I don't know which team I like?

Now it seems that everyone has this understanding: I think that if the club is written, the author must be a fan of which club. So Inter Milan fans write about the glory of Inter Milan, and AC Milan fans write about the glory of AC Milan. So why can't I write about it if I am not a fan?

Why do I have to write Zhang Jun to Real Madrid to show my sincerity towards Real Madrid because I am a Real Madrid fan? Is it nerve-wracking?

It is unrealistic for Zhang Jun to go to Real Madrid, and I am not so stupid as to use my novels to satisfy the YY psychology of being a Real Madrid fan. I am writing about champions, not real Madrid fan fan fan. I need to be responsible for the vast majority of readers, rather than daydreaming by myself.

As for that sentence... you can go and watch "The Grand Historian", this is a funny dubbing movie created by CCTV's strong men and women. This sentence comes from Cui Yongyuan's mouth. It is purely for funny things.

Cui Yongyuan's original words were: "Twenty thousand? Just kidding! I won't have a signature pen and I'll just go everywhere, and I'll eat delicious food and drink spicy food... I was a member of the News Comment Department in my life, and I died from the News Comment Department... Dead people! Twenty thousand! Absolutely not! No... Well, can I get another two thousand?"

Regarding Ren Yudi's assets, you can understand it as a random number I made up. As for how much money he has, it doesn't matter. It's just to let Ren Yudi buy Florence without making a fortune. You can even think that he only has a net worth of 300 million euros.

In addition, regarding the gangster issue, I do not deny that Ren Yudi has a close relationship with the Italian mafia. As for how close this relationship is, you can YY yourself. I won’t say it, and the novel will not be mentioned in the future. These backgrounds are purely hidden things, and their existence only provides a possible background for the novel. But whether they have an impact on the development of the novel, this...the impact is, but only with this.

Many readers think that when I clicked Ren Yudi, I thought the champion was going to write about the underworld and the business war... I can only say that you have read too many YY novels in the gangster business war. The champion is a football novel, and all plots must revolve around football. For the sake of business war, and for the sake of the underworld, I don’t need to use that kind of thing to attract attention.

As for the help of noble people, clichés and so on.

The champion is YY based on reality. Let me ask a person who wants to accomplish a little career. In today's society, you have no background or backstage, and if you make a mistake, no one will help you with it, what can you achieve? Don't read too many YY novels, and you really think that you can succeed by relying on personal strength. Society is realistic, and life is cruel. A hero has three helpers. For Qiu Suhui, he and Chen Wei do have friendships with friends under the mutual use of each other. For Zhang Jun, Ren Yudi is his friend and his partner on the road to success.

Moreover, Ren Yudi did not simply support Zhang Jun with the "Long Live Friendship" and unconditional support. He needed Fiorentina to launder money for him. But I don't write about these things, and Ren Yudi didn't say them, because the focus of the championship is not on these things, and Zhang Jun is just a happy football player, and he shouldn't know these things. Even if you lie, sometimes a kind lie is more liked than a straight person who says everything.

If Ren Yudi doesn't come out, I will still replace people to buy it. Now the old men in Russia are ready to move. The reason I chose Ren Yudi is because this can make many old readers who start to watch it with concern and the novel is more attractive.

Back to football itself, if any successful superstar does not have a team that is consistently excellent, a head coach who knows and makes good use of people, a group of good partners, and a good environment, can he succeed? Maradona is so good, and success in Naples is also the result of the above factors. So why does Zhang Jun say that he is boring, abrupt, and stiff after all this?

Rivaldo is a world footballer. Why is his performance in Barcelona and AC Milan completely at two extremes? It is because AC Milan's environment is not conducive to his performance.

The reason why superstars are called superstars is because they perform very well in a specific period - of course, this period is relatively long - without the performance of their performance, with brilliant stars and dazzling eyes, rather than saying that they can perform like this under any circumstances and in any environment. Otherwise, Irving would not have gone to Real Madrid and returned to the UK, and Maradona would not have escaped from Barcelona. Robert Carlos' performance in Inter Milan is still average. Paul Ince, Henry, Vieira and others have performed very poorly in a club. Can you say they are not superstars?

Those who think that Ren Yudi's success depends on his friends, I can only say that you didn't look carefully. Ren Yudi's appearance has indeed created a good external environment for Zhang Jun's future path. However, I have also mentioned in the novel that Zhang Jun's real success depends on himself. Ren Yudi also said that some things need to be achieved by hard work. Barty's words were not a direct shot, and then disappeared, including those of Dilivio, which will continue to play a role in the future.

Now I’m talking about Barty’s contradictory plot later, isn’t it too hasty?

In addition, regarding the popularity of Rez Group and the huge increase in Ren Yudi's property in five years, you can fully understand it this way:

First of all, it is true that Ren Yudi has had so much money in five years, so how did he come about? If you do business step by step as you said, it is definitely impossible. But Huafang also mentioned that in the process of acquiring Fahrenheit, Ren Yudi did not face her head on, but bribed her relatives through some despicable means and instigated internally. What I wrote this is to make it clear to everyone that Ren Yudi is not an honest businessman, and his identity is relatively complicated. If a person wants to accumulate a lot of wealth in a short period of time, then taking an improper path is the best choice. Ren Yudi took this path. But as for the specific path, you YY yourself, I will not write it, and I will not mention it in the future. Because these backgrounds only provide a reasonable background for this acquisition, and will not affect the future development of the champion.

Then there is the issue of popularity. Ren Yudi's company is indeed rich and it will indeed attract the attention of the media. But do you think the professional football media will frequently mention his name when his company has nothing to do with football? Then it is normal for Zhang Jun and others to not know, because Zhang Jun doesn't read newspapers at all, and he doesn't even read sports newspapers, let alone boring financial reports.

Then there is the acquisition action. Why is it still not known after the acquisition?

It is also very simple. Considering the disgust of Europeans with Chinese capital intervention, Ren Yudi specially registered a new company in Europe: Renz. The purpose of this company registration is to acquire Florence. He can completely entrust his subordinates and friends to deal with this matter, and he does not need to show up at all.

It is normal for a large enterprise to have many subsidiaries. There is no need for the boss to let all subsidiaries know its existence. Moreover, if many subsidiaries are not investigated in depth by the outside world, many people do not know what connections they have. This can also hide Ren Yudi's identity well.

Huafang knew the existence of Ren Yudi, but she didn't know the relationship between Ren Yudi and Zhang Jun. It's okay, why did she tell Zhang Jun about financial matters? So it is normal for Ren Yudi to suddenly appear like this.

Finally, about the question of your plot pileup.

I have to say that the setbacks of a professional player are those things. They are injured, disagree with the head coach, transfer, and unacceptable to the local environment... Do you want me to write that Zhang Jun was injured because his toes were stuck in the drain when taking a shower, or was caught in a prostitute, and his mood was depressed. Besides, he raped a virgin? Or was he rumored to have an affair with a maid? An illegitimate child? This is considered novel?

I have already made it clear that Feng Qing's second appearance has nothing to do with Ren Yudi. It was just to reflect that Feng Qing really cared about Zhang Jun, explaining why he tried so hard during the last treatment, and also making a final say foreshadowing left by Feng Qing when he left the Netherlands.

I can't see any plot piled up. If you observe the experience of a professional player, you will find that it is basically the same. Ronaldo is like this, Beckham is like this, and Raul is like this. This is the development law of players, and no one can be exceptional. Even if he is the protagonist, it is not possible.

As for the future, I can only say that you don’t understand the football world enough. Who says that you can have the best time with money? Lazio, Rome, AC Milan, Juventus, and Inter Milan are all very rich, but can they monopolize all championships when they have money? Have they never encountered any failure? Inter Milan is so rich, why can’t they win a league championship in 17 years?

Chelsea is so rich, why didn’t he win the championship in the season he coached by La Nairi? Why did Real Madrid have all lost all three major players in the past two years?

Frustrations in life and setbacks on the football field, only when these things gather together can they achieve a flesh-and-blood, successful, but imperfect Zhang Jun, and achieve a good story. As for what it means to be boring when setbacks are boring, and you will feel good, you can only say that they are too impatient. Chinese football itself is impetuous. Have you also been infected with this bad habit?

In my new introduction, I said that the champion must be read all of them before I can understand what I mean. As for the various unhappiness and outbreaks that occur between them, you can fully understand that this is a necessary path on the road of life, and this is an indispensable topic of conversation between a legend.

In the end, no one is perfect, and I don’t want to write Zhang Jun as a perfect person. He has all kinds and those shortcomings in both personality and technology. Some shortcomings will be corrected, while some shortcomings will not be corrected until he is old. This is a living person.

Some people say he is stubborn, some people say he is cowardly, some people say he is capricious, and some people say he is false. Then use these as evidence to say that the champion is poor and boring. I say it doesn't matter, this is exactly what I want to pursue, this is what I want to write about, and this is what I want to write about, the champion I want to write about, and the evidence they find is exactly what I want to do and what I am working on.
Chapter completed!