"In the end, the author was forced to control me out of context for several chapters, but he didn't even write the main story!"

At this point, if it weren't for Kong Junxiang on the stage, Zhu Yufei would have cursed loudly: "This piece of shit is really good at swimming! He must run an aquarium at home."

"I just read the chapter that was updated in the morning, and I was surprised that it stopped when I was about to kiss you. I was so angry that I rushed to the comment area immediately."

"As expected, they were all scolded. After watching it for a while, I felt a little better."

When Li Luo heard what he said, he felt a little ashamed and didn't know what to say.

This kind of intimate plot between the male and female protagonists has to be repeated over and over again to make it enjoyable.

Every move must be able to touch the reader's heart.

When the foreshadowing and brewing are sufficient, then break through in one fell swoop and release the excitement.

Usually at this time, the more the readers scold you, the more it means you are right about what you wrote, and the number of follow-up orders will increase.

It's just that it's hard to explain this kind of thing to readers in detail, and it's easy to get scolded. After all, the author's perspective and the reader's perspective are two different things.

If Li Luo had read a similar book, he would probably have cursed like Zhu Yufei.

So it's not easy for Li Luo to make any excuses, after all, he did it on purpose.

"What did Zhu Yufei say?" Yan Zhusheng asked curiously, "The kiss scene with Dongdong? I think I've seen it before."

"Shh..." Li Luo quickly stopped her words, "Don't talk nonsense in the classroom."

Yan Zhusheng blinked, nodded, then leaned close to Li Luo's ear and asked in a low voice: "Dong Dong also kissed, Jiang Mingyue also kissed, will it be Mo Qinghan's turn next time?"

?”

"Mo Qinghan is the first one to kiss me, okay?"

"But what you wrote was a secret kiss." Yan Zhusheng said seriously, "The other two kissed each other while they were awake, so Mo Qinghan has to do it again."

"The other two only kissed when it was necessary for filming."

"Mo Qinghan can also sing if he needs to." Yan Zhusheng thought about it for a while and nodded vigorously, "For example, when I sing love songs, I am not emotionally invested enough. If I can get a kiss, it should be much better, Li Luo

If you can’t write it, do you want me to let you experience it?”

"...You are quite a nice person."
Chapter completed!