Chapter 295 A family dinner for four families(2/2)
The previous film "Yao Chi Xian Yuan" was also criticized miserably.
Therefore, Ying Zhicheng is quite surprised that Li Luo's book was actually picked up by a professor in the literature department and he wrote a thesis on it.
"Ahem...it's actually not as exaggerated as Uncle Xu said." Li Luo turned over the documents in his hand, and then said modestly, "As a professor in the literature department, Uncle Xu analyzes Internet articles from a macro perspective.
impact."
"It just happened that the first online article I read was written by me. In fact, there are many other online articles that are more suitable for research."
"I'm just getting lucky. I'm lucky enough to be chosen."
"You can't say that." Xu Rongsheng laughed and said, "You kid, you can't always be modest in this regard."
"It's not like I haven't read other online articles during this time. I've also read all the works that were awarded awards at the symposium."
"However, from the perspective of creative mode, there are obvious traces of design in the structure and plot of your writing."
"Unlike some other books, I feel that I am creating more based on my feelings. In terms of plot structure, it is relatively rough and not refined enough."
Li Luo could understand what Xu Rongsheng said.
After all, he only started to learn online literature after graduating from college in his previous life.
At that time, various studies and summary of techniques for online writing were already very complete. Most of the time, it depends on whether you are willing to sink your heart into learning and practicing.
In the current era, Internet writing has developed from the barbaric period, although from the perspective of commercial value, it has developed into a golden age.
However, in terms of theoretical research on web writing itself, it is still at a relatively early stage.
Some of the analysis of online articles are either very simple and simple summaries such as the three golden chapters, pretending to be cool, pretending to be a pig and eating the tiger.
Or it is the ancient way of deconstructing the three elements of traditional novels: characters, plot and environment, which is easily acclimatized.
Later on, it extended to the integration of many key elements of web writing such as information gaps, emotions, interpersonal networks, etc., and then slowly developed a complete theoretical framework system for web writing.
In this regard, Li Luo looked through Xu Rongsheng's paper and found that he was indeed analyzing it from the perspective of the three elements of traditional novels, so he also gave some of his own understanding.
After Li Luo pointed out the key point, Xu Rongsheng had some realization: "The emotions you mentioned can be found in traditional novels, including the information gap, etc., there are actually traces."
"That's right." Li Luo smiled, "For example, in "The Romance of the Three Kingdoms", Guan Yu passes five levels and kills six generals, or the scene where he warms wine and kills Hua Xiong. They are both exquisite grasps of emotions."
"It's just that in the past, more research was done on the plot itself, and rarely focused on these emotional details."
"But for online literature, it belongs to serial literature. Readers read it while the author writes it."
"In order to ensure that readers can keep reading, the author needs to consider the effect of these emotions on readers to ensure that they can't help but continue reading the book the next day after putting it down."
Xu Rongsheng thought about the author's perspectives provided by Li Luo, and couldn't help but ponder, and had many inspirations in his mind.
Xu Youyu originally joined in the fun and looked at the documents in Li Luo's hand, hoping to see him making a fool of himself as a member of the society.
Who knew that while we were chatting, we actually came up with something real for him.
Xu Youyu's eyes seemed to be shining as he watched Li Luo chatting with his father.
Although the younger brother was always at a loss when teased by her, at this time, he seemed unexpectedly mature.
If you didn't look at his young appearance and just listened to the conversation between these people, it would be difficult for anyone to imagine that this was an exchange between four adults and a child.
For example, Ying Chanxi and Yan Zhusheng could hardly say anything, so Li Luo could still communicate freely.
"Okay, okay, let's eat." At this time, Cui Suling put two plates of food on the dining table and greeted everyone on the sofa, "dinner is ready."
After hearing what Cui Suling said, the eight people on the sofa stood up one after another.
Xu Rongsheng and Cui Suling sat together, and Xu Youyu sat next to his father.
Yan Zhusheng sat next to Xu Youyu, followed by Yuan Wanqing, Ying Zhicheng, Ying Chanxi, and then Li Luo and Li Guohong.
Lin Xiuhong sat in the empty seat between Li Guohong and Cui Suling.
Ten people sat in a circle. Li Guohong, who was theoretically the head of the family, stretched out his chopsticks and started eating. Everyone started using their chopsticks.
The two mothers who were responsible for cooking now began to ask about the parent-teacher conference.
Everything went as usual for Xu Youyu's sophomore year of high school. He also performed stably in the midterm exam and was still ranked first in liberal arts.
Cui Suling asked a few questions briefly, and then told her to go to bed early and get up early in the future, and it would be best to go for a morning run with Li Luo and the others.
Having said this, Cui Suling looked at Li Luo and said with a smile: "Li Luo, just treat her as an aunt and please ask her. When you wake up in the morning, you don't have to worry about her mood. Just drag her out of bed and follow her."
Let's go for a morning run together."
"This body is the capital of revolution."
"It used to be okay if she was alone, but now she has such a good friend to run with. How can she keep up?"
Facing Xu Youyu's resentful expression, Li Luo smiled and made an OK gesture: "No problem, Aunt Cui, I will tell her to get up and run every day from now on."
Xu Youyu snorted lightly and glared at him angrily.
Yan Zhusheng, who was sitting next to her, was also a little unhappy.
Originally there were only two people, she and Li Luo, so why were there more and more people?
Fortunately, there was still night running. Yan Zhusheng's brows widened when he thought of this.
After talking about Xu Youyu's situation, Lin Xiuhong also asked about the new college entrance examination reform.
Li Guohong said what Teacher Kong meant, then looked at Li Luo and asked, "Aunt Yuan said that you already have your own plans? Have you arranged for Zhu Sheng to choose subjects?"
"Well, that's right." Li Luo nodded, stopped his chopsticks and said, "Including Xixi, the three of us plan to choose physics, history and geography."
"Choosing physics is mainly to ensure coverage of first-hand major choices. Basically, 95% of university majors can be applied for if you choose physics."
"As for geography, it is Zhusheng's advantage. It can increase her points very well and ensure her score advantage."
"As for the last subject, politics is not what Zhusheng is good at. Chemistry and biology are a bit more tiring, so I chose history."
"For me and Xixi, there is not much difference in what we choose, so we just choose the same one."
Having said this, Li Luo paused for a moment, and then added: "I plan to take the bamboo sheng for a surprise training during the summer vacation, and I will sprint with Xixi and the others before the exam."
"In November of the second half of the year, when it's the first time to take the exam for the second year of high school, Xixi and I will try our best to finish the three minor subjects first."
"Zhu Sheng will depend on the review situation. Choose at least one geography subject first, and then finish the remaining minor subjects. This will make it easier for you to take the art exam later, and you only need to prepare for the Chinese, Mathematics, and English exams."
Listen to Li Luo finish his analysis.
Yuan Wanqing didn't have any objections.
Ying Zhicheng asked: "Xixi, do you think so too?"
"Yeah." Ying Chanxi nodded, "My biology is relatively average among the secondary subjects. Physics is quite good and I can easily get points. There is no difference between the other two subjects I choose."
Anyway, for her, the first grade level and minor subjects are basically the result of 100 points.
There's really nothing to worry about.
But several parents here could tell that these three children deliberately chose the same minor subject. They obviously wanted to be placed in the same class when they were divided into classes in their second year of high school.
Thinking of this, Ying Zhicheng glanced at Li Luo, and finally nodded without saying anything, acquiescing to his daughter's choice.
After seeing that her father did not continue to ask questions, Ying Chanxi also breathed a sigh of relief, and quietly released the small hands under the table that were holding the chair.
She secretly poked Li Luo's waist next to her and gave him a thumbs up.
Li Luo looked down, smiled, stretched out his hand, gave a thumbs up, and kissed her thumb.
After dinner, it was finally Yingchanxi's turn to wash the dishes today.
Seeing that everyone was resting on the sofa, Ying Chanxi immediately followed Lin Xiuhong and helped her clear the dishes on the dining table, and then followed her to the kitchen to help wash the dishes.
Others sat around on the sofa and chatted while taking advantage of their free time just after dinner in the afternoon.
Ying Zhicheng glanced at the thesis documents that had been placed on the coffee table, thought of Li Luo's novel, and asked him: "How are you preparing for what Aunt Yuan talked about with you before? What is the content of the novel?"
Come on, is there no problem?"
"It's already being laid." Li Luo made an OK gesture and then said, "There are already 300,000 words in the manuscript. This part of the manuscript will be published by the end of June."
"The plot of "I Am a Singer" is already being laid."
"We will probably control the direction of the plot in the future, and we can basically confirm that it will be synchronized with Aunt Yuan's program on August 21st."
Listening to the two of them talking, Li Guohong was confused: "What are you talking about? Why can't I understand?"
Li Luo looked at his father, then at Ying Zhicheng, asking if he could talk about this?
Ying Zhicheng nodded and said directly: "Wanqing will participate in the "I Am a Singer" competition during the summer vacation."
"Ah?" Li Guohong was stunned for a moment, and then he reacted and said with surprise, "Is it the "I Am a Singer" that competes for the top song? I really like this show!"
Li Luo couldn't help laughing when he saw his father making such a fuss.
Yuan Wanqing on the side also smiled and said: "The song I sang was written for me by your son."
"What the hell?!" Li Guohong was startled and turned to look at Li Luo, "Have you written a new song again?"
"It's not just new songs." Ying Zhicheng folded his arms expressionlessly, "This guy has covered all nine songs of Wan Qing's new album."
As soon as these words came out.
The living room suddenly became quiet.
Chapter completed!