If you have too long and don’t get used to reading, please read it. tt

"Xiyin Kunlun" was uploaded on May 1st last year. I remember that for this, I specially posted a status on Weibo to commemorate this day.

Now, more than a year has passed, and "Xiyin Kunlun" has also been completed (Okay, okay, it's a bad ending!)

To be honest, when I wrote this book, I didn’t expect it to be available for the shelves, and hundreds of people would spend money to subscribe every day (thank you again for all the subscriptions, rewards, monthly votes, recommendation votes, and comments! It is precisely because of your support that I can keep writing until now! Otherwise, with my urinary nature, I would have quit my job long ago ==)

Then let’s talk about the reasons for the failure. The most fundamental reason is that they have no experience as a novice, so the plot begins to collapse from the middle stage. There are many reasons for this result. For example, the protagonist is placed on a large stage as soon as he appears, and strong men appear one by one from the beginning, resulting in a lack of the pleasure of conquering one level after another. For example, the plot is single, although I want to avoid the routine of changing maps and packaging and upgrading, it was still not avoided in the end.

In addition to the plot collapse, there are many other flaws. The biggest flaw is that the setting of the cultivation system and level system is too simple and generalized. The simple and generalized cultivation system leads to a serious lack of pleasure when the protagonist breaks through. The simple and generalized hierarchy system leads to countless book friends complaining that fighting is like a game, you have a fourth-grade flying sword and I have a fourth-grade Taoist tt (I know I was wrong)

Therefore, the new book will definitely overcome these shortcomings. I believe that the reading fluency of the new book and the rationality of the plot development will be higher than that of "Xiyin".

OK, then the question is here.

Which excavator is better?

Oh, no, it's not this, but the new book has been published, but in Creation, the title of the book is "Dragon Lord" which is the link.

It mainly tells the story of the protagonist who finally swept the mainland from a young noble, but it will not be written as a simple invincible yy stream. I don’t like the plot of the villain being completely deceased and the protagonist being pretentious, so the supporting characters in it will also have different personalities and are not simply giving food to the protagonist.

Here is the introduction:

"Never appeared in the Dragon Lord before? Then I will be the first Dragon Lord in history, no, the only Dragon Lord!"

——Hiro Mennon

So this will be a novel about territory construction and kingdom battles. In the period, it will involve the history, nation, customs, human nature, geography, climate, food, culture, war and other aspects of the Anya continent. I hope to present a complete style of a continent of another world.

Here, the author hopes that all book lovers can read and stick to ten chapters (I have only uploaded one chapter now! Please recommend it, collect it, click! When the author wrote "Xiyin", he just wrote the .

After uploading for a week, the editor took annual leave. I didn’t know how to find the second editor to recommend it for a long time, so there was only one classified recommendation in the new book period, and even the tail of the new book list was not enough. It was so miserable! So please let the author’s new book period not be so miserable!!!) See if there is any progress compared to "Xiyin", and then decide whether to stay.

Thank you! Chapter 1: Young man from Linyou

Linyou County is a major county on Shaanxi Road. It is located in the hilly and gully area of ​​the dry plateau in Weibei. It is adjacent to Yongshou and Qianxian in the east, Qianyang and Fengxiang in the west, Fufeng in the south, Qishan, Bin County in the north, and Lingtai County in the north. Because it is not far from Chang'an, the capital of the previous dynasty, it is extremely rich.

It was midsummer and it was the hottest afternoon, so few people worked hard, most of them stayed in the house for a nap, and some sat under the shade of trees, shaking their palm-leaf fans to cool off and chat.

The golden crow hangs in the air, the cicadas roar, and there is no hot wind.

In a small house in the middle of Linyou County, a little boy of seven or eight years old was copying books by his desk. The room he was in looked simple and unpretentious, without much decoration. After a closer look, the utensils in the room were all exquisite and valuable. From this, it seems that the little boy's family is in a wealthy place.

Look at this little boy again.

Because he is still young, his eyebrows have not grown wide, and his facial features are at most medium and above. However, the calm temperament exudes from his body makes him look brighter. In addition, his eyes are as bright as stars, which makes him feel very smart as if he is the finishing touch.

Not only that, on such a hot day, a child of seven or eight years old can actually copy books here with patience and meticulous work, which shows his perseverance.

Although she was already sweating, the little boy was still writing intently. After finishing the last stroke, he put down his pen and picked up the square scarf beside him and wiped away the sweat from his face.

The little boy's surname is Chu, his name is Chuan, and his name is Chunming. He will be nine years old this year as autumn begins. Although he is now free of food and clothing, he looks like a rich young man, but his life experience is actually a bit bumpy.

Chu Chuan's mother was dysfunctional when she gave birth to him and almost couldn't hold on. In the end, although she tried her best to give birth to him, she was exhausted. If it weren't for the magic medicine, she would have passed away at that time. However, even so, Chu's mother passed away when Chu Chuan was five years old.

His father was a monk. Although he had some cultivation, he was seriously injured when he was young and lost his wife who was deeply in love with his wife. After several blows, his health was still bad, so he also went there when Chu Chuan was seven years old.

In this way, Chu Chuan lost his parents at a young age.

Fortunately, he also has a second uncle. After Chu Chu's parents all passed away, he adopted him in his mansion. Because he was the only son of his brother, he had never given up, so Chu Chu Chu's second uncle and aunt treated him very well and treated him as a parent-child.

But it was just a matter of relying on others. Chu Chuan had already remembered it when he arrived at his second uncle's house, so he had a gap with his second uncle and aunt.

In addition, he lost his mother since childhood. Although his father cared about him, he was very strict in discipline. Therefore, although he was sensible and polite, he acted properly, but his temperament was too cold and distant.

But in the eyes of others, the son of the Chu uncle's family is definitely a gentle, polite and promising child. Chapter 1: The boy Linyou

Linyou County is a major county on Shaanxi Road. It is located in the hilly and gully area of ​​the dry plateau in Weibei. It is adjacent to Yongshou and Qianxian in the east, Qianyang and Fengxiang in the west, Fufeng in the south, Qishan, Bin County in the north, and Lingtai County in the north. Because it is not far from Chang'an, the capital of the previous dynasty, it is extremely rich.

It was midsummer and it was the hottest afternoon, so few people worked hard, most of them stayed in the house for a nap, and some sat under the shade of trees, shaking their palm-leaf fans to cool off and chat.

The golden crow hangs in the air, the cicadas roar, and there is no hot wind.

In a small house in the middle of Linyou County, a little boy of seven or eight years old was copying books by his desk. The room he was in looked simple and unpretentious, without much decoration. After a closer look, the utensils in the room were all exquisite and valuable. From this, it seems that the little boy's family is in a wealthy place.

Look at this little boy again.

Because he is still young, his eyebrows have not grown wide, and his facial features are at most medium and above. However, the calm temperament exudes from his body makes him look brighter. In addition, his eyes are as bright as stars, which makes him feel very smart as if he is the finishing touch.

Not only that, on such a hot day, a child of seven or eight years old can actually copy books here with patience and meticulous work, which shows his perseverance.

Although she was already sweating, the little boy was still writing intently. After finishing the last stroke, he put down his pen and picked up the square scarf beside him and wiped away the sweat from his face.

The little boy's surname is Chu, his name is Chuan, and his name is Chunming. He will be nine years old this year as autumn begins. Although he is now free of food and clothing, he looks like a rich young man, but his life experience is actually a bit bumpy.

Chu Chuan's mother was dysfunctional when she gave birth to him and almost couldn't hold on. In the end, although she tried her best to give birth to him, she was exhausted. If it weren't for the magic medicine, she would have passed away at that time. However, even so, Chu's mother passed away when Chu Chuan was five years old.

His father was a monk. Although he had some cultivation, he was seriously injured when he was young and lost his wife who was deeply in love with his wife. After several blows, his health was still bad, so he also went there when Chu Chuan was seven years old.

In this way, Chu Chuan lost his parents at a young age.

Fortunately, he also has a second uncle. After Chu Chu's parents all passed away, he adopted him in his mansion. Because he was the only son of his brother, he had never given up, so Chu Chu Chu's second uncle and aunt treated him very well and treated him as a parent-child.

But it was just a matter of relying on others. Chu Chuan had already remembered it when he arrived at his second uncle's house, so he had a gap with his second uncle and aunt.

In addition, he lost his mother since childhood. Although his father cared about him, he was very strict in discipline. Therefore, although he was sensible and polite, he acted properly, but his temperament was too cold and distant.

But in the eyes of others, the son of the Chu uncle's family is definitely a gentle, polite and promising child. Chapter 1: The boy Linyou

Linyou County is a major county on Shaanxi Road. It is located in the hilly and gully area of ​​the dry plateau in Weibei. It is adjacent to Yongshou and Qianxian in the east, Qianyang and Fengxiang in the west, Fufeng in the south, Qishan, Bin County in the north, and Lingtai County in the north. Because it is not far from Chang'an, the capital of the previous dynasty, it is extremely rich.

It was midsummer and it was the hottest afternoon, so few people worked hard, most of them stayed in the house for a nap, and some sat under the shade of trees, shaking their palm-leaf fans to cool off and chat.

The golden crow hangs in the air, the cicadas roar, and there is no hot wind.

In a small house in the middle of Linyou County, a little boy of seven or eight years old was copying books by his desk. The room he was in looked simple and unpretentious, without much decoration. After a closer look, the utensils in the room were all exquisite and valuable. From this, it seems that the little boy's family is in a wealthy place.

Look at this little boy again.

Because he is still young, his eyebrows have not grown wide, and his facial features are at most medium and above. However, the calm temperament exudes from his body makes him look brighter. In addition, his eyes are as bright as stars, which makes him feel very smart as if he is the finishing touch.

Not only that, on such a hot day, a child of seven or eight years old can actually copy books here with patience and meticulous work, which shows his perseverance.

Although she was already sweating, the little boy was still writing intently. After finishing the last stroke, he put down his pen and picked up the square scarf beside him and wiped away the sweat from his face.

The little boy's surname is Chu, his name is Chuan, and his name is Chunming. He will be nine years old this year as autumn begins. Although he is now free of food and clothing, he looks like a rich young man, but his life experience is actually a bit bumpy.

Chu Chuan's mother was dysfunctional when she gave birth to him and almost couldn't hold on. In the end, although she tried her best to give birth to him, she was exhausted. If it weren't for the magic medicine, she would have passed away at that time. However, even so, Chu's mother passed away when Chu Chuan was five years old.

His father was a monk. Although he had some cultivation, he was seriously injured when he was young and lost his wife who was deeply in love with his wife. After several blows, his health was still bad, so he also went there when Chu Chuan was seven years old.

In this way, Chu Chuan lost his parents at a young age.

Fortunately, he also has a second uncle. After Chu Chu's parents all passed away, he adopted him in his mansion. Because he was the only son of his brother, he had never given up, so Chu Chu Chu's second uncle and aunt treated him very well and treated him as a parent-child.

But it was just a matter of relying on others. Chu Chuan had already remembered it when he arrived at his second uncle's house, so he had a gap with his second uncle and aunt.

In addition, he lost his mother since childhood. Although his father cared about him, he was very strict in discipline. Therefore, although he was sensible and polite, he acted properly, but his temperament was too cold and distant.

But in the eyes of others, the son of the Chu uncle's family is definitely a gentle, polite and promising child. Chapter 1: The boy Linyou

Linyou County is a major county on Shaanxi Road. It is located in the hilly and gully area of ​​the dry plateau in Weibei. It is adjacent to Yongshou and Qianxian in the east, Qianyang and Fengxiang in the west, Fufeng in the south, Qishan, Bin County in the north, and Lingtai County in the north. Because it is not far from Chang'an, the capital of the previous dynasty, it is extremely rich.

It was midsummer and it was the hottest afternoon, so few people worked hard, most of them stayed in the house for a nap, and some sat under the shade of trees, shaking their palm-leaf fans to cool off and chat.

The golden crow hangs in the air, the cicadas roar, and there is no hot wind.

In a small house in the middle of Linyou County, a little boy of seven or eight years old was copying books by his desk. The room he was in looked simple and unpretentious, without much decoration. After a closer look, the utensils in the room were all exquisite and valuable. From this, it seems that the little boy's family is in a wealthy place.

Look at this little boy again.

Because he is still young, his eyebrows have not grown wide, and his facial features are at most medium and above. However, the calm temperament exudes from his body makes him look brighter. In addition, his eyes are as bright as stars, which makes him feel very smart as if he is the finishing touch.

Not only that, on such a hot day, a child of seven or eight years old can actually copy books here with patience and meticulous work, which shows his perseverance.

Although she was already sweating, the little boy was still writing intently. After finishing the last stroke, he put down his pen and picked up the square scarf beside him and wiped away the sweat from his face.

The little boy's surname is Chu, his name is Chuan, and his name is Chunming. He will be nine years old this year as autumn begins. Although he is now free of food and clothing, he looks like a rich young man, but his life experience is actually a bit bumpy.

Chu Chuan's mother was dysfunctional when she gave birth to him and almost couldn't hold on. In the end, although she tried her best to give birth to him, she was exhausted. If it weren't for the magic medicine, she would have passed away at that time. However, even so, Chu's mother passed away when Chu Chuan was five years old.

His father was a monk. Although he had some cultivation, he was seriously injured when he was young and lost his wife who was deeply in love with his wife. After several blows, his health was still bad, so he also went there when Chu Chuan was seven years old.

In this way, Chu Chuan lost his parents at a young age.

Fortunately, he also has a second uncle. After Chu Chu's parents all passed away, he adopted him in his mansion. Because he was the only son of his brother, he had never given up, so Chu Chu Chu's second uncle and aunt treated him very well and treated him as a parent-child.

But it was just a matter of relying on others. Chu Chuan had already remembered it when he arrived at his second uncle's house, so he had a gap with his second uncle and aunt.

In addition, he lost his mother since childhood. Although his father cared about him, he was very strict in discipline. Therefore, although he was sensible and polite, he acted properly, but his temperament was too cold and distant.

But in the eyes of others, the son of the Chu uncle's family is definitely a gentle, polite and promising child. Chapter 1: The boy Linyou

Linyou County is a major county on Shaanxi Road. It is located in the hilly and gully area of ​​the dry plateau in Weibei. It is adjacent to Yongshou and Qianxian in the east, Qianyang and Fengxiang in the west, Fufeng in the south, Qishan, Bin County in the north, and Lingtai County in the north. Because it is not far from Chang'an, the capital of the previous dynasty, it is extremely rich.

It was midsummer and it was the hottest afternoon, so few people worked hard, most of them stayed in the house for a nap, and some sat under the shade of trees, shaking their palm-leaf fans to cool off and chat.

The golden crow hangs in the air, the cicadas roar, and there is no hot wind.

In a small house in the middle of Linyou County, a little boy of seven or eight years old was copying books by his desk. The room he was in looked simple and unpretentious, without much decoration. After a closer look, the utensils in the room were all exquisite and valuable. From this, it seems that the little boy's family is in a wealthy place.

Look at this little boy again.

Because he is still young, his eyebrows have not grown wide, and his facial features are at most medium and above. However, the calm temperament exudes from his body makes him look brighter. In addition, his eyes are as bright as stars, which makes him feel very smart as if he is the finishing touch.
To be continued...