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Wonderful comments by book friends without heaven

I remember that in my article, I also saw Ershe saying that "The Rebirth of the City of the Grandmaster" is another peak in challenging the writing style. I think senior readers should be very clear that there is a difference between a pure urban literature and a passionate and fighting novel. If you write a passionate and a novel like fighting, it is actually not a failure as long as you grasp the reader's yy spirit. Pure urban is another realm. Novels in urban literature are more close to reality, so they are not only yy, but also reasonable. If you can't do this, I think most readers will not feel immersive. And urban literature does not mean that you can write as you like, you have to consider the real problems. If you don't solve these problems, the article I want to write is just an urban fantasy novel. If you lack a story, it will happen around you and feel that you are in the scene.

Now let me talk about my feelings about reading this novel. I remember when I first saw Ershe’s new book "The Grandmaster City Rebirth", I really wondered if another martial arts master traveled to modern bulls (preventing river crabs). (I can’t blame me for having such thoughts at the beginning, but I just blamed Ershe for writing these bulls (preventing river crabs) from the beginning to force people~) I excitedly clicked in and read the introduction. The first idea is pure city, picking up girls, officialdom? The second idea is better not to read it, and I am not interested in this kind of article. It’s just because of this first feeling that I almost betrayed the death penalty of this book. Fortunately, I didn’t, otherwise I would have missed a good book. But I put this book aside, and I didn’t have any comments for about a week. (I’m sorry to Ershe here... I almost threw you into the cold palace. Haha) And I started reading it again because I was bored at that time.

I came in and took a look. Hey, don't say it... I couldn't stop at first sight. I finished reading all the chapters in one breath. After reading it, I almost thought that I was the body that was only eight years old, but I had the soul of Lanling Xiaoxiao in my previous life. It was not because of anything else, because of some little humor in the first chapter, and because of this, I was slowly attracted to it for this little humor. As the two snakes continued to read chapter by chapter, I was slowly attracted to what the protagonist experienced, as if it happened to me, not because of anything else. - Piao Tianwen - the stories of writers, chat records, and urban backgrounds all made people have a story that happened to me, which is called being immersive. I have to make people amazed! And reading this book also made us understand the rules of Piao Tianwen better.

From this book, I saw Ershe’s hard work. I think this book Ershe was definitely not the outline that started after the "The Strong Young Master" was written. It must have killed many Ershe’s brain cells and time to make this novel. What reason do we have not to read this book? Now I am just waiting for Ershe’s book "The Rebirth of the City of the Grandmaster" to be released. After it is released, I will definitely subscribe as soon as possible, and prepare for Ershe at any time. I dare not say that let Ershe be as awesome as the protagonist in the Rebirth of the Grandmaster City of the Grandmaster City! But I will also make some contributions to Ershe, for nothing else. Just for this book, I have a feeling of being in the scene, and can make me feel the existence and every emotion in the book!!

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The above is a comment from book friend “No Heaven”!

ps: Being able to write a book that makes people like is my greatest wish now. The speed of this book cannot be guaranteed, but I will definitely guarantee the quality and give full play to my best level...
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