But the question is, what evidence did he destroy? Also, the assistant was not the last person to see the editor-in-chief before the incident.

Five minutes before the incident, a literary editor entered the editor-in-chief's office, but she didn't stay long. She was there to deliver a manuscript to the editor-in-chief.

According to her, when she met the editor-in-chief, the editor-in-chief was in very good condition.

In the next five minutes, no one entered the editor-in-chief's office.

Just when the case reached a deadlock, the protagonist ran out and found out the truth of the matter.

The truth is that the female editor and the editor-in-chief's assistant were actually on the same team. The female editor entered the editor-in-chief's office first, killed the editor-in-chief, and turned on a tape recorder. There was a screaming sound in the tape recorder.

Five minutes later, the sound of screaming was played. The assistant to the editor went in first, turned off the tape recorder, and took advantage of the chaos to take away the tape.

After reading it, Yu Dong raised his head and looked at Deng Xian, "Is this the end?"

Deng Chen nodded: "Well, Teacher Yu, is this long enough?"

"This article is long enough, but the content is really thin."

"Isn't this a short film..."

"It can be short and concise enough." Yu Dong smiled and continued, "There are many problems with your script. First of all, from the perspective of script writing, you have inserted a lot of ineffective monologues and explanations. For example, here, the protagonist Zhang

Heng saw a clock on the wall. The beating of the minute hand made people feel a little confused. Why did you write this? It was not used later. In the end, the shot of the minute hand was thrown there without being picked up. Also, the police were investigating

When I was working on the case, the protagonist had too many inner monologues. I know you wanted to make the protagonist’s character more fleshed out, but the problem is, these ineffective monologues are useless at all. It’s better to add a few effective actions.”

"Script writing should be concise. You, Teacher Zhang, must have emphasized this many times. To be honest, when I write novels and essays, I am not as verbose as you."

"Yes, yes." Deng Chen nodded repeatedly, "We will definitely change it."
Chapter completed!