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Chapter 697(1/2)

After reaching a unified opinion, the master and servant devoted all their hearts to the preparations.

First, he pulled Jiao Shun to ask questions, and after confirming that he couldn't say anything new, he began to discuss the character of the protagonist of the story on his own.

Origin, age, height, appearance, food, clothing, housing and transportation, the rules of the Liyuan Garden...

In fact, Jiao Shun has an impression of these, but if he does everything himself, it will weaken Lin Daiyu's sense of participation, and secondly, if the book is finished in three to five days, what should he use to trip Lin Daiyu?

Therefore, I only said that I was "following the crowd" and did not know too many details.

He also said that if he wanted to ask more questions, he would not invite Jiang Yuhan back from Europa immediately - and this was naturally unavailable, so Lin Daiyu and Ou Guan left him to discuss it themselves.

Seeing that the two of them, especially the Ou Guan, were immersed in it as if they were possessed by the devil, Jiao took the opportunity to quietly leave the study room, called Xueyan to explain a few words, and took advantage of the opportunity to get intimate for a while before riding the car and leaving.

When he got home and told Shi Xiangyun about this, Shi Xiangyun was eager to try it out, but Jiao Shun didn't dare to let her spend time at this time. He tried to persuade him. Finally, he took out Wang and Xu as an excuse, so that she could temporarily give up this idea.

However, he made a promise that he would update the contents of Lin Daiyu's books to his home simultaneously.

No words all night.

The next day, Jiao Shun stood up following Xing Xiuyan, washed and ate, rushed to the yamen, and began to gather his subordinates to discuss the subsidy reissue for this Mid-Autumn Festival this year.

Anyone who has worked in an institution knows that sharing money and power are the most challenging leadership skills.

It’s still simple to do in the engineering sector. As the top leader, Jiao Shun can do such a thing to the lower level—but in the Ministry of Industry, he does the job of the chief executive, so he is naturally responsible for this matter.

So in the evening that day, Jiao Shun rarely spent more than an hour on duty, so he didn't go to Taohua Lane.

When I saw Lin Daiyu again, it was already the third afternoon.

As soon as he knocked on the gate of the courtyard a few times, Xue Yan, Zi Juan, Chun Xian, and Madam Wang came out in panic.

Jiao Shun was startled and asked what was wrong.

"It's amazing!"

Madam Wang said excitedly: "The girl seems to have been possessed in the past two days, and she doesn't care about eating or sleeping. She always keeps herself in the study with Ou Guan in the study. How do you think this is done?!"

Jiao Shun then breathed a sigh of relief and comforted him: "Will she have a sustenance be better than she thinks every day? Mom, don't worry, I'll give her a few words to tell her, at least don't miss eating and sleeping."

As he said that, he headed straight to the study room.

Although he was prepared for a long time, Jiao Shun was still surprised when he entered the study and saw the messy scenes inside.

But I saw the ground full of discarded manuscript paper, under the table, ink-grained pieces of paper hung under the corners of the wall, and even on the vases.

Lin Daiyu and Ouguan were also unkempt and dirty, especially Ouguan. His face was covered with several black traces, and he didn't know how to wipe and wash them. While grinding ink for Lin Daiyu, he was thinking about something as if he was crazy.

Jiao Shun looked back at Xueyan, and Xueyan immediately whispered: "It's not that we don't want to clean up, it's the girl who stops him from cleaning up."

Tsk ~

Although I guessed that Lin Daiyu would be involved, I didn’t expect to be involved in this way.

Jiao Shun stepped to the table and subconsciously glanced at the table. He thought that what he saw would be a stack of drafts, but found that the one spread on the table was clearly a stack of white paper.

"What?"

He couldn't help but say in surprise: "I have produced so many useless manuscripts, but I haven't even written the beginning?"

Lin Daiyu looked up at him, then lowered her head to the luck of the white paper on the table.

Jiao Shun then realized that it was not only the Lou Guan who became a flower-faced cat, but also some ink marks were stained on her forehead.

At this time, Ou Guan seemed to finally find Jiao Shun, and was so scared that he bowed to the salute.

Jiao Shun pointed to Daiyu, then pointed to the white paper on the table, and asked, "What's going on?"

"The girl always feels that it's not good enough, so she keeps..."

Jiao Shun immediately understood what was going on.

Simply put, it is because it is not able to adapt to the changes in the subject matter.

The poems, songs and essays that Lin Daiyu is good at are very meticulous in writing, either by tricks or pondering them for a long time. In short, you must try your best to do your best within your ability.

But this approach seems a bit out of place in a novel.

It is not that it is completely useless, but it should be written first and then deleted, modified and refined. If you directly pull the tune to the extreme from the beginning, it will be difficult to start writing later.

Of course, it is not difficult to get started or end up like most online articles. How could Lin Daiyu, who is accustomed to being stubborn, make such a choice?

So it is natural for her to know Kavin.

Jiao Shun explained his analysis, but Lin Daiyu sighed: "I actually figured this out later, thinking that I should not be too careful and write down the storyline before talking about it - but I still couldn't write it out at the beginning!"

Jiao Shunqi said: "Why is this?"

Lin Daiyu breathed a sigh of relief, picked up the book "Pride and Prejudice" and read it casually, saying, "When I first read this book, although I was attracted by the content in the book, I always felt that the words and sentences were too plain, but when I started writing, I realized that these plain and real things were the most difficult to describe."

But it turned out that after Lin Meimei realized the disadvantages of being greedy for the sake of being greedy for the sake of perfection, she also tried to sort out the storyline first, but she soon encountered another bottleneck.

When writing about the characters' dialogue expressions and psychological activities, although she may not be very satisfied with her achievements, she can still maintain a level of 70 to 80%. However, whenever she wants to effectively advance the story, it is always difficult to get what she wants.

The writing was detailed, and she felt it was empty and she looked at it, as if she was trying to express new lyrics and said it was worried, without any real feeling.

The writing is concise and exquisite. With her talent and poetry foundation, she can write enough charm to attract imagination. But if she writes it according to this, it will be at most a legend of the Tang and Song dynasties.

If she hadn't read "Pride and Prejudice", she might think that it's nothing wrong with writing a legend in the Tang and Song dynasties, but now...

She obviously couldn't accept such a result.

Perhaps, Lin Daimei’s personality and age are not suitable for novels, at least not for writing individually.

Jiao Shun was thinking silently in his heart, thinking about how to give her a step so that she could give up her plan to write a book for the time being. Although this was instigated by Jiao, he couldn't just watch Lin Daiyu hit the south wall and didn't look back, right?

But when the words came to his mouth, he suddenly had a flash of inspiration in his mind and changed his mouth: "If not, please find someone else to help me understand it?"

Lin Daiyu frowned slightly and thought seriously: "Xiangyun is afraid that it won't work either. However, Sister Xing, after all, she has more knowledge, maybe..."

"Siuyan has more knowledge, but she may not be the most suitable candidate!" Jiao Shun smiled slightly and said confidently: "If you think about it carefully, isn't there anyone who has written something similar?"

"Have you written something similar?"

Lin Daiyu was stunned at first, and then looked at Jiao Shun straight, because she suddenly thought that the "diary" written by Jiao Shun at the time had a bit of a straightforward and sensational meaning.

Besides, this story is provided by him...

"Wait, wait!"

Seeing that she was staring at her eyes gradually glowing, Jiao Shun quickly stopped again and said with a lot of laughter and cry: "If I have that ability, I still have to wait until now to recommend myself - I mean the person who made up those diaries at the beginning."

The person who made up the diary?

Lin Daiyu's pretty face turned cold and she immediately asked, "What does it mean when you suddenly mention her?"

"Nothing interesting."

Jiao Shun spread his hands and said, "I just suddenly thought of it. Do you think it's not suitable?"

Lin Daiyu was silent. After Jiao Shun mentioned this, she also found that this person's writing style was indeed the most appropriate, and he did not miss others in terms of talent and knowledge.

only……

She twisted her body, turned her back to Jiao Shun and sneered: "Then you just give her this story, why do I need to do this in this way?"

“Haha~”

Jiao Shuncong wrapped her neck around her neck, put her chin on her shoulders, and laughed and said, "My sister's talent is like jade and jade. Just picking up one piece is a treasure, but if you want to use it as a jewelry piece for your head, you still need some gold, silver, copper and iron to set it up - but no matter how you set it up, there is no reason to win over the main thing!"

Lin Daiyu was struggling with anger. He heard him compare himself to a treasure and the man to a stream of gold, silver, copper and iron. His heart suddenly cleared, and he snorted, saying unconsciously: "You can't appreciate poetry, you're just coaxing me."

"I can't appreciate poetry, but I can appreciate people."

Jiao Shun said, then he leaned over her lips.

Lin Daiyu subconsciously turned her head, but she was still kissed by Jiao Shunman, and kissed her until she was short of breath. Then she gave up.

When the Ou Guan next to him saw this scene, he hurriedly left the door and brought it to the door.

Lin Daiyu gasped for a moment, finally calmed down her breath, but suddenly frowned and said, "Even if she is the most suitable one, if the matter I am still in the capital is leaked..."

"You think."

Jiao Shun stopped the conversation and asked back: "Will she leak this news?"

Lin Daiyu was silent again.

After taking a deep breath after a while, he said decisively: "Then try it!"

If Jiao Shun didn't say this, she might not have been willing to use the other party, but now, she wants to know more about what choice that person would make.

…………

Two days later, Xue Mansion.

"Your uncle can also use this, and there are these..."

Aunt Xue was in tears, filling in items related to food, clothing, housing and transportation into the box, and occasionally interspersed with a few childhood memories.

Xue Baochai next to her remained silent.

In two days, Wang Ziteng will arrive in the capital. Relying on Jia Yun to make a connection, the Wang family has been allowed to meet Wang Ziteng on the dock - of course, this is just a private grant from the middle and lower classes, not an official permission.

At that time, in addition to Wang Ziteng's wife and children, Mrs. Wang, Aunt Xue and Jia Baoyu will be present.
To be continued...
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