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Finish this testimonial.(1/2)

From March 2021 to April 2023, "Gou Dao" has finally finished the book for two years.

First of all, thank you for your support and encouragement along the way!

I would like to thank Goose, the fifth old master, who gave Latte many reminders and guidance; I would also like to thank Gou Dao, the editor-in-chief of "Gou Dao", and Bacon, who was reported many times along the way, and I have to ask the two masters to review each time. The two masters were always enthusiastic and enthusiastic, and gave Latte great encouragement; I would like to thank my colleagues for traveling 80,000 miles, and several times, and I suddenly realized after discussing the plot with Eighty thousand miles.

There are also the first leader, "Ink Glaze", and the first silver leader, "Orange Caramel Porridge", which all gave the latte a great encouragement!

I also want to thank the operation officer for being "very boring". Although Latte is the author, as a newcomer at the starting point, he knows nothing about operation and even various rules. He is "very boring". When "Goudao" was still toddler, he took the initiative to serve as an operation officer and took care of the comment section and book friends.

In addition, the operation officer "Wildfire" has always been enthusiastic about operating "Goudao", coordinating the reader group and organizing information.

Here, thanks to the entire operation team!

Thank you "Chen Xiaomeng"! Thank you "Dongfeng 231"! Thank you "FlowerDance"! Thank you "Xia Xiyan"! Thank you "Lord of Heaven"! Thank you "Yuegucheng"! Thank you "Great Student"!

Thank you for your hard work!

The completion of more than 4.7 million words is complete, and I feel a lot of emotion.

Latte is here, let’s talk about the plot of this book first.

Pei Ling was born into a small family under the rule of the Demon Sect. After activating the system, he joined the Chongming Sect, one of the nine major sects. He then became weak all the way... and fought for the battle all the way, and finally became the Immortal Emperor.

In the seventh volume, the latte was updated much slower.

In this volume, the setting of timelines requires a lot of theoretical support.

Often, a latte needs to consult a large amount of information for an inconspicuous paragraph.

Perhaps when readers look at it, they will not pay attention to the details.

But as an author, you cannot ignore any logic in it!

The reason why the second half of the last volume is so slow is really difficult, not the thousands of words in each chapter, but the logic of each chapter, the logic between chapters, the logic of the preparation, the logic of the climax, and the logic of the ending...

Many times I took leave, but it was not that I couldn’t write the chapter on that day, but that the next dozen chapters were not cleared and I dared not write it.

The solution to the latte is to calm down, think more, read more books, and search more information...

For example, when writing the copy of [Qingqiu On Taoism], you must consider the final battle between Pei Ling and the Dragon King;

For example, when "Chi Yao" told Pei Ling that three chess games, those three chess games were the battlefield of the last battle;

For example, in the chapter "Young Hero", the story compiled by the human race must be determined for all the plot outlines of the following...

Although Latte has written many successful copies in front of it, every time it is foreshadowed, it is still scolded to doubt life...

In Latte's view, a successful foreshadowing is that readers can immediately record it deeply after reading it, but they don't know that it is a foreshadowing.

At the same time, the foreshadowing itself should also have a certain interest and highlights.

Chapter 73 of the last volume: The young hero is such a foreshadowing.

In this chapter, the ancestors of the human race composed four stories.

In the subsequent plot, only the last one will be selected.

But if that chapter only made up the last story, after reading it, with the experience of latte, few readers can write it down again.

To make all readers remember that story, we must use a step-by-step method to first modify a few familiar allusions, turn the story itself from foreshadowing to a joke, and then integrate the story that the latte is really about to write into it.

After that chapter was posted, no one knew it was a foreshadowing!

No one will forget that story!

At the same time, this foreshadowing itself is not short of funny points!

In that chapter, no matter how readers say water or question latte... it just proves that it is a very successful foreshadowing!

The plot reaches the point where the immortal master of "Yanxu" takes action, and this foreshadowing finally begins to be revealed, and all the logic is natural!

Including the last battle between Pei Ling and the Dragon King, the three difficult problems, and the corresponding three battlefields... they are all paved with the chapter "Young Hero", so everything can be taken for granted!

There are many similar details in this book.

Han's Villa is a separate copy itself, but it is also the foreshadowing of the climax at the end of the first volume;

Peng Yingguan, ability is a separate copy, and it is also the foreshadowing of the "Fusheng Chess Game";

Whether it is Pengyingguan or Xiwu School behind, Latte has repeatedly suggested in the article that the years in the "strange" are not "present", but happening in the "past".

Going to the prehistoric years and climbing the former building... This setting was thought of a long time ago.

The clue in the sixth volume is "Qingquan Realm Heaven" for the Tiantian. In the seventh volume, the agreement between the Golden Crow Emperor and the Dragon King is that one goes to the "Heavens" and the other goes to the "Future", which just echoes each other.

Only then can the plot where the Dragon King appeared in "Qingquan Jietian" be natural...

In addition to these foreshadowings and natural climaxes, the most important thing that makes the latte spend time is the demeanor or style of the superiors.

This is difficult to write!

For example, although Su Lijing encountered all kinds of unexpected problems, as the leader of the Holy Sect, he has always been online.

He would not yell at all because of a little setback;

You won’t lose your mind just because your wife is robbed;

We will not be angry and hysterical just because the ancestors favoritism.

Until the protagonist's cultivation level exceeded his, he was still calm and calm, weighing the pros and cons at every step, and not losing the clever family background, and once had a high position and should have a cunning and demeanor.

Su Lijing is a villain, but he has always been a qualified sect leader.

Well... several female readers who read "Gou Dao" like the role of Su Lijing very much...

There is also the Golden Crow Emperor. From appearance to ending, she is not fighting for honor to become honor.

She is a natural superior who despises everything in the world.

Finally, I gave everything I had for an ideal goal.

The style of the Dragon King is completely different from that of the Golden Crow Emperor.

He did not tell any self-report, and all the secrets were hidden in his heart.

He rejected the invitations of all the immortals, and he did not choose to surrender to any immortals.

Even at the last moment before his death, the enemy in his eyes was not Pei Ling who took away the Dragon Queen, but the Immortal Lord who blocked his path!

From beginning to end, he was enemies with the Immortal Lord and regarded the Immortal Lord as his opponent.

The king of man, Kui Lie, shows his appearance, every conversation, reactions when encountering things, and enemies when facing them...

"Suzhen"'s first appearance...

"Nowadays" appeared in the Qingqiu chess game...

"Chongming" took Pei Ling to meet the immortals in all worlds...

Every detail of the superior must conform to the superior's pattern.

When writing these superiors, sometimes you have to think about a simple conversation for a long time. The meaning of the words is easy to write, but to take into account the superiors' style, you have to use words carefully.

After all, the latte is too poor and I have never seen a real superior in reality...

The nine ancestors of the school have only written four, well, they should be three: the king of humans, "the beginningless" and "the peak of the sea".

The human king attacks the Netherworld is part of the human race strategy;

"Nowadays" going to Qingqiu is part of the human strategy;

"Chongming" defrauding Wanxian is also a human strategy...

These superiors not only cannot speak without being too arrogant, but also have a special meaning in everything they do.

To be honest, it is very simple to satisfy only one point.

But to meet these two points at the same time, writing is still a bit difficult.

In addition, it is the pattern shaping of the four immortals.

The immortal master of "Yanxu" admires Pei Ling because Pei Ling is in the system's management and goes against the will of heaven like drinking water;

"Li Luo" Immortal Lord discusses with Pei Ling because he sees that Pei Ling is not bad in nature and wants to influence him...

Here we will talk about the reasons why the "Yanxu" Immortal Lord and "Li Luo" Immortal Lord tied the final battle.

In that battle, the immortal "Li Luo" had two thrones, one was "order" and the other was "life".

The Lord of the Netherworld possesses "death", but is just an immortal king, and it is not enough for him to symbolize death. As long as he possesses "death" of both "past" and "future" at the same time, he can become a noble, which is mentioned many times in the article.

The Immortal Lord of Li Luo has the "life" of "past" and "future", so "Li Luo" has two ranks.

In contrast, the "Yanxu" Immortal Lord also had two thrones at the beginning, one was "chaotic" and the other... half of the "sky", "night", plus half of the "earth", and "land of all worlds".

"Night" plus "day" is a rank of honor.

"The land of all worlds" plus "water of all worlds" is also a rank of honor.

"Night" plus "Lu" is symbolically equivalent to a rank of honor.

But "Night" and "Lu" are completely incompatible.

If a normal immortal occupies both "night" and "land", he will go crazy.
To be continued...
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