【Revision and planning】
All those who read this are angel readers. I am glad this book has brought you fun and thank you for enjoying this book.
But in fact, this book has been criticized all the way, and it has been criticized for being criticized. Readers, post bars, forums, and various places have been unlocked and criticized for being rewarded.
The author actually wanted to overhaul the previous text a long time ago, but after thinking about it carefully, the first 150,000 words were actually criticized everywhere except for the first tens of thousands.
Sakurajima and the plot related to the aid rumors were criticized for NTR.
The plot of the male protagonist bullying Chiba was criticized.
The plot of Chiba's blackening is sprayed.
The plot of Qianye’s post was slandered (and was blocked by the review and cannot be released yet).
The male protagonist has many personalities and is criticized for being NTR (to be precise, the setting of the self and self).
The male protagonist interacted with Shirakawa for a small amount and was licked by a dog (??).
By the way,
Cat girl Qianye, who was working in a cat girl's uniform, was also criticized for being NTR, saying that she was seen by others.
The author Jun thought to himself that Haruhi Suzumiya, the later Qingyin, Story series, popular idol series, and beautiful girls wearing welfare uniforms are everywhere. Could it be that they are all NTR?
Other minor problems have also been criticized in a small amount, so I won't list them.
Well, there are also comments like "The Tauren comes here"!?
Cracked.
The main account of the skirt in the middle was also frozen by malicious reports.
The newbie was frustrated and was criticized like this, which made her mentality explode.
The light novel in the author's mind is a two-dimensional novel. NACG is inseparable, so I also tried to write anime feeling when I wrote it, but I really never dreamed that so many things were "poisonous points".
First, reflect on yourself. Because of the issue of preference, there are problems with the darkness of the writing; the first time I serialized, there are problems with the problem of not having good rhythm.
But the author’s biggest feeling at the moment is that he is actually like a two-dimensional world?
I thought my second-dimensional concentration was definitely not high, because I wouldn't have written Japanese in novels...
But this is not the case. The X-point Light Novel Partition cannot be regarded as a real two-dimensional novel area (except for fan), and there must be choices in terms of theme and plot.
In one week, the first order of more than 200 yuan has become a high order of 500 yuan, and the average order of 300 yuan has been established. It has a lot of growth. It is not difficult to achieve the goal of 500 yuan.
However, I have a lot of collections every day, and it has increased by several hundred a day, but very few can persist until the future.
The more you collect, the more you consume the potential of the book, and it will be difficult for readers who have left behind to look back.
The difficulty of editing the text is so great that you have to practice almost all the plot and do not change the main line. After all, readers who read this, at least you like this book a little!
And if you get criticized too much, you will feel negative about not being able to write books. In addition, you are sick, the author’s update has been really bad recently.
However, the author promised to finish more than one million words, and if he was not a eunuch, he would work hard to continue writing. Since it was a long writing cycle, he would not care about temporary gains and losses.
Therefore, the update will slow down in the rest of this month. Let’s take a closer look at how to deal with the previous article in this situation.
At the latest, normal updates will be resumed next month.
At that time, the number of updates will not be as bad as it is now, and everyone who reads books will feel more comfortable.
I was urged to update these days, and I was both moved and ashamed.
Thank you for everyone who saw this.
above.
Chapter completed!