Chapter 44
Professor Bai Lunyue's decisive words did not shock anyone in the office.
When people walk in this world, no one is like the old general on the stage, with FLAG behind them.
Chen Xun just mentioned this, and everyone would have a clear idea in their minds.
Let’s look at the materials and consciously learn about this classmate through multiple channels. After that, you can make a good decision.
Chen Yu is not in a hurry, so they are even less anxious.
Get back to the point.
Chen Xun finished reading all the materials on Bai Lunyue's notebook and said, "I am convinced of your opinion. Of course, I am not saying that your opinions can be brought into all versions. I just said that I agree with the shortcomings of the application of techniques you proposed in this version that are too awkward and too stiff. Of course, what you cannot deny is that the writing is smoother and skillful, and I agree with it."
Everyone in the office learns Chinese, and the ability to focus on key points is just like steel pliers catching dolls.
The point in Chen Xun's words was instantly captured by everyone.
Bai Lunyue frowned: "What do you mean is that every version of him has very big changes, and will he make changes to his shortcomings?"
Chen Xun nodded.
The people in the office were in thought, and a teacher spoke very quietly.
"I didn't agree with him directly enrolling in the school at the beginning. As the highest institution, we need to have our own standards. His articles are too controversial. It can be said that the main point of the controversy is that we are not worthy of the position."
"Many people think that the quality of his articles is not worthy of the rewards he received. If we rashly recruit him to school, will the uproaring public opinion make his articles with unstable treatment levels become a general trend and thus cause bad influence? None of us can bet on the bet."
"But with his sober vision of being able to see the flaws of his articles, I feel that he is just not learning enough. If he can learn more, he can better use the articles he has learned to fill in the shortcomings of his articles and enrich the quality of his articles... So from this point of view, I can't bear to waste talents."
Professor Luo has always been a neutral school and talks a lot.
But at this moment he was addicted to the article, as if he disliked the people around him making noises that made him noise, and even made a silent gesture for the first time.
Dean Chen Xun nodded: "Old Luo, what do you have any opinions?"
"It's only a little time after that. I don't believe you have finished reading all the articles. I've said that I've read those three versions after reading them, right? Have you noticed the twenty-four revised manuscripts?"
Bai Lunyue, who was reading the second article, paused for a moment, took a breath of cold air, and stopped obsessing with picking words, but read it smoothly and quickly.
He can no longer read so scrupulously, otherwise when everyone finishes reading and joins the discussion, he will not be able to join the discussion because he has not read the main materials, which is so embarrassing.
He is the main player of the opposition.
President Chen Xun's expression became serious: "Old Luo, I have only asked everyone to come after reading these revised drafts."
Professor Luo nodded, and the eyes of the two made people confused.
A professor directly suggested: "Otherwise, the documents you sent are sent in order anyway, so the progress we read is probably not too far. Since you have read them all, please adjust the order we should read later. After that, we analyze them one by one in order and understand them bit by bit. The advantage of this is that it is not as good as reading them all at that time, and the opinions are very messy."
This kind of thing has not happened before. The group brainstormed an article and sorted out a lot of opinions. After that, it was finished, summarized and summarized a group paper and signed the name of their Xiaoyaoyuan collective.
This kind of paper is often subscribed by a large number of people as soon as it is released, and the quality is really high.
"The first article... I think Professor Bai's views have been analyzed in a comprehensive way. What we should analyze is the progressive relationship between these articles."
Dean Chen Xun stood up and consciously began to preside over the meeting.
Discussions in the office gradually began to rise.
In fact, when Chen Yu was conceiving his own manuscript, each article had new ideas, and none of them was written casually.
Sometimes he is creating unconsciously, but his thoughts and pursuits will still gradually be reflected in his writing.
The first edition is a combination of articles that he used to conceive the article with his commonly used ideas and then incorporated into the skills of this world.
This is exactly the same as the previous article "Female Dust", but what is stronger than "Female Dust" is that he has read so many books and his understanding of skills has reached a higher level.
This is a writing process that can be written, but the consistency is still not strong, and there is no feeling of being done in one go.
Intermittently, not only Chen Yu looked uncomfortable.
He estimated that readers who are good at digging clues with smooth plots will be uncomfortable.
So on the second time, Chen Yu adjusted the order of the story according to the writing habits of this world.
I deleted or added or reduced some techniques, and read them several times in the men's bathroom. I felt that I had no stuttering when I read them, and then I finished the draft.
In the third version, Chen Yu had a lot of ideas, but in the end he did nothing.
The final draft was that he wrote the manuscript that he was most satisfied with exactly the previous method.
That's so refreshing, that's the enjoyment of writing.
The ones I wrote before were not so frustrated that he was almost ashamed of. He just thought that it was a matter of no text, but a life!
A headache is really too brain-cell-intensive.
What made Chen Yu even more heartbroken was that he clearly understood that after the two versions he had racked his brains to write would be despised by various masters.
He was born and raised and studied for so many years. The number of words he published in the papers was probably more than the number of words he wrote in Chen Yu’s half-blank text. You can tell what Chen Yu is at a glance.
Sorry, there must be some.
But Chen Yu was still brave enough to present his article.
I am willing to sacrifice myself and dare to take down the emperor.
Only by being shameless can you write your own manuscript well.
Who says there is no real experience in ridicule?
What you know best is your enemy, and sarcastic words often hit the nail on the head.
Chapter completed!