529 The 20,000-character masterpiece (Part 2)
The problem was circling in my heart, and Ning Yuan could hardly wait to open the next page.
At this moment, he lost his identity as an ordinary commentator on Phoenix.com, and like an ordinary reader, he was eager to know the following plot.
For people like Ning Yuan who love stories, work can be carried out at any time, but the happiness brought by reading is rare, so at this time he only wants to feel the charm of "Rural Teacher" from the identity and perspective of a reader.
In the following plot, Carbon-based aliens conducted a sample survey on planets within range, and it was soon Earth's turn.
Unexpectedly, reasonably, the aliens selected the student of Li Baoku, a rural teacher in this small village. In fact, by this time, Ning Yuan had already faintly understood the context and intention of the story.
But not only did he not lose interest, but he became more and more expectant!
The aliens began to ask the children questions for testing, and asked several questions in a row.
These children were all silent. After all, they were just students from the countryside. They had limited knowledge. Before they could learn a lot of things, their teacher Li Baoku had already passed away.
Some alien high-level officials have lost their patience.
Prepare to directly destroy the earth, and the weapons are ready.
However, the problem continues, "3 Civilization Test Question No. 14: Please describe the relationship between forces between two interacting objects."
The children returned in unison: "When an object exerts a force on the second object, the second object will also exert a force on the first object. The two forces are equal in magnitude and opposite in direction!"
Blessings to the soul!
Newton’s three laws!
Ning Yuan couldn't help but stand up from his seat: "That's it!"
He waved his fist hard, as if he was honored, and was happy for the children.
Yes, the answer to the questions drawn by this group of aliens is the three Newtonian laws that the rural teacher Li Baoku did not hesitate at all costs at the end of his life.
And below, "Rural Teachers" continues:
["3 Civilization Test Question No. 14 passed, 3 Civilization Test Question No. 15: For an object, please explain the relationship between its mass, external force and additive."
The children said in unison: "The addition of an object is proportional to the force it is subjected to and inversely proportional to its mass!"
The alien intelligent voice sounded: "3 Civilization Test Question 15 passed, Civilization Test passed! The story of the target star 5oo92147 has been completely reversed!
Ning Yuan's eyes shining: "A rural teacher taught students the three laws of Newton's mechanics before he died. In the end, these students saved the earth with the three laws he recited. Such wonderful ideas are really wonderful!"
If the mood at the beginning was disappointment, then Ning Yuan's mood can be described as a surprise at this moment.
It was not until ten minutes later that Ning Yuan's mood gradually calmed down: "Okay, I will watch this "Rural Teacher" again next, as a special commentator of Phoenix.com."
This is his job.
The feeling of reading stories from the perspective of a professional and reading books from the perspective of a reader is completely different.
It took another half an hour to watch Ning Yuan finally finished watching the second time "Rural Teacher". This time he watched it carefully, so many details that were not visible for the first time were revealed this time.
First, there is the exquisite structure!
This "Rural Teacher" uses a lot of comparisons and has a clear structure!
The poor and dying rural teachers are preachers who save the earth. The rural students who cannot enjoy educational resources have become heroes who save the earth. The smallness of the village contrasts with the hugeness of the earth.
On the other hand, the smallness of the earth contrasts with the power of carbon-based life.
The stories of rural teachers are common, and domestic reports on this aspect are not uncommon, but when placed in the universe, the content of science fiction is added, it can turn decay into magic.
The story jumps outside the earth to see humans and examines themselves from a lofty perspective.
This is something that only science fiction can do. Luoyang has formed its own unique memory point in the story, which makes people shine. It is only 20,000 words in length, but it is so exquisite that it is at its peak!
"Secondly, there are also tributes to teachers in this movie."
The Long Kingdom emphasizes a respect for teachers and respects the truth, and Luoyang shows it in it
In the universe, other species directly spread information, and only the people on earth choose to use the profession of teachers to convey knowledge, without memory inheritance.
As the transmitter of the torch of civilization, teachers acted as a medium for the transmission of knowledge between two generations of living organisms, which surprised the alien senators and the supreme consuls. This is a word from the ancient times of the Galaxy civilization.
Finally, Ning Yuan concluded: "Although it is still science fiction, it has an incredible artistic conception."
I was convinced, Ning Yuan was really completely convinced by this article "Rural Teacher". At first, I thought that writing about teachers in Luoyang was a failure, but now I look at it all
The full text shows that this is exactly the cleverness of "Rural Teachers"!
Rural teachers and aliens, two lines are written crosswise, and they have a contagious force that runs through time and space.
In the end, the children used the knowledge taught by rural teachers to save the earth, which reflected excellent humanistic care.
As a special commentator of Phoenix.com, I was played with by Luoyang’s creative thinking, and I really couldn’t accept it.
In Ning Yuan's view, this short science fiction of about 20,000 words can be regarded as the interweaving of the realism of the masterpiece and the glory of science fiction, making this work a perfect combination of reality and romance.
"The five-star masterpiece is gone, Bai Yisheng is not at the right time."
Ning Yuan was very moved because Bai Yi's "The God of Flowers" was not that bad.
As a science fiction work that can be rated as four stars, "The God of Flowers" is worth watching. The story has a clear context and relatively organized structure. Although there are certain bugs in the middle, it is not considered a flaw.
But I have to compare Bai Yi's "The God of Flower" with Luoyang's "Rural Teacher"...
It can only be said that it is a pity, because the difference between the two is one level. After all, excellent works like "The God of Flowers" are quite common, but masterpieces like "Rural Teacher" are really hard to come by.
The media still want to hype, Luoyang vs Baiyi?
From creativity to perfect victory in ideas, from control to crushing writing skills.
Ning Yuan couldn't help but remember the shocking self-introduction in Luoyang during an interview in front-end time.
Perhaps, this young genius may really become an indispensable existence in the science fiction field of Dragon Kingdom in the future!
(To be continued.)8
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Chapter completed!