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What you said is right, it is a good suggestion, but I wrote it poorly... The main reason is that I have less time, so I kept thinking about the plot in my mind, so I didn't add it much, especially the part of trusting the protagonist. Your suggestions are great. I will modify it now and add what you said into pieces. I can't change the points that are really inconsistent and I can't change them. I don't have the energy to rewrite them now, so I'm sorry.

As for the small groups of monsters, there is no one near Moldavia. As for the terrain, I have a map here. I know what the terrain of the entire Northland and Moldova looks like, but it is difficult to explain... Anyway, it is necessary to go around from the back of the monster without breaking through the warriors. It is definitely too late. The protagonists and they walked along the mountain path on the edge of the Black Forest and took shortcuts from the side, so they appeared between the Black Forest and the fortress, blocked the road by the beast tide.

The array of tens of thousands of monsters is indeed vast - but when I appeared, I said it through the patrol manager that there are only one or two thousand layers of beast tides, and it has dozens of beast tides pounced over one after another. Each wave of beast tide is a different kind of monster. I didn't pay attention to the description, but most of them are strong edges and magical turrets inside. This is an army commanded by the Crazy Dragon, not a beast tide formed by nature.

As for camping, I said at the beginning that the protagonist can stay on and off on the 17th day and night, and at most close his eyes for a few hours to run to the north. At that time, he was the peak of silver. Now, all members of the 50-person Knights are in Baiyin. If it only takes a few days, he can almost do something similar, and the dragon-blooded war horses are strong enough.

The maid suddenly disappeared, and the knights were also suspicious, but they just guessed that they had come down halfway, or the personal guards hidden in the shadows, and no one thought of changing them into weapons. In fact, many people didn't care much about Firefly at all, and Firefly was also physically transformed most of the time. Anyway, if you don't see it, you won't see it. It's a big deal if the lord didn't say anything.

As for why it changed from the beginning - there is no room for war, and you have to do your best from the beginning. And if you make a breakthrough, the protagonist has the confidence to break through directly. Even if there is an accident, he has various means to regain it. As for the leader of the monsters according to the plot, they are still transforming... I will not spoil it, and I will write the next plot honestly, I won't hurry up.

(A group of people said I was water, how dare I write such a detailed plot...)

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The protagonist's personal force is indeed written too much... But to be honest, I originally wanted to write a hero who is personal heroism, but it is indeed less used and not so often...

As for the main line, I probably didn't point it out in the early stage. The protagonist is a warlike man, and his biggest goal is to attack the strong... If it was his original name, the Lord of the God of Hunting, you will definitely be able to see what the main line is...

Maybe it's because I have an outline... I personally feel that all the plots point out what the main line is.

As for the question about the family cemetery, I think I wrote it very clearly... The old butler had already died.

He is a divine machine. He should have died together when the protagonist's father died. Because he was entrusted with the Sky Blue Pearl and the Energy Core, he lived ten more days and brought the protagonist's father's ashes back to the family cemetery. (Volume 1, Chapter 4) The divine machine core is made of part of the master's flesh and blood, and also has a blood mark. With the divine machine contract, you can naturally enter and exit the cemetery.

As for why there is only a piece of paper wrapped in the sky blue pearl, it is very simple... The protagonist's father fought to the death to beat a group of golden gods back. It would be nice to have paper on his body to write a suicide note. Since it was a suicide note, he would not move around. He put it in front of him after erecting the tombstone and quietly turned into his own weapon and returned.

The family cemetery is in the narrow path of time and space. No one can enter without permission. There is still sealing power around it, which is safer than any safe. Even if he kills the protagonist, his uncle, can't enter. There is only heaven and earth, and there is no wind, let alone rain (Volume 2, Chapter 13, Chapter 14, Chapter 15).

I have written all these, at most they are not as clear as they are now... Logically speaking, there will be no such misunderstanding...
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