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About "Full Moon Scimitar" (written in front of the volume)

Logically speaking, I will only post such chapters in the works.

However, because this chapter is indeed very important and related to the direction of the text of this volume, I uploaded it at the beginning of this volume again (a free chapter).

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"Full Moon Scimitar" was first serialized on June 21, 1976 in "Marriage Spring and Autumn".

At first, the book was called "The God of Swords", but later it was renamed "Full Moon·Scimitar".

This book can be regarded as a later work by Mr. Gu Long.

At the beginning, it is an old-fashioned and wonderful story direction, which tells Ding Peng finally practiced a unique "meteor outside the sky" sword technique, and wanted to become famous in the world. Unexpectedly, the world was sinister and deceived by the beauty, and eventually became a thief who secretly learned sword techniques.

I think the skills at the beginning are quite profound. Although the plot written is not particularly novel, each development is in-depth.

Then the second paragraph began. After escaping from the sky, the legend of the fox fairy was introduced. It was very strange and mysterious, as ethereal as an immortal. This was undoubtedly the move of "seeking innovation and change" that Mr. Gu Long has always advocated.

He wanted to introduce more fantasy colors to traditional martial arts novels.

Of course, if it is really written as a fox fairy, it will become a fairy tale novel, not a martial arts.

Therefore, it was revealed later that the so-called "Fox Fairy" was originally the family of the Demon Sect leader living in seclusion, but because their martial arts skills were too high, they were almost magical in the eyes of ordinary people.

Ding Peng then obtained the inheritance of swordsmanship, returned to the world, took revenge, and the portrayal of the villain Liu Ruosong also showed the changes in human nature.

Then the Divine Sword Villa was led out, pushing the story background to the "Xie Xiaofeng period", and then it was written that Xie Xiaofeng suddenly had a daughter, the seventeen-year-old Xie Xiaoyu, and Xie Xiaoyu led out the elders of the Demon Sect.

When you arrive at this place, the background and clues of the entire story are basically explained in full, and you will only look at how the story will be developed later.

From this point of view, it should be written by Mr. Gu Long.

But after Chapter 11 "The Combination of Two Swords", Sima Ziyan was the writer.

The traces of his pen substitution are very obvious.

I have seen someone say that the "Full Moon Scimitar" was written by Gu Long's disciple Ding Qing. Otherwise, the writing skills of Gu Long's disciple Ding Qing would not be so poor, and she could not write such a bad style and character (Sima Ziyan's "plot" level is actually not bad according to ordinary martial arts).

I will give you some text descriptions after "The Combination of Two Swords":

"Chapter 19 Xiaoxiang":

[So, after being deliberately deceived by Qin Keqing, he will feel very angry, sad, and discouraged, because he is a person with love and desire, spirit and flesh.]

[So when his love is born in Qingqing, he will be so loyal.]

[He was indifferent to Xie Xiaoyu tempting him like that.]

[So, even though he was influenced by the lovely spring wine from the Hundred Flowers, he could still resolutely get rid of the temptation of Xie Xiaoyu's physical body.]

[So, he would rather spend money to buy a woman to solve the charm in his body, and also use this method to inform Qingqing how he needs a woman.]

After being deceived by Qin Keqing, he felt angry and sad, which means that he is a person who combines "love and desire, spirit and flesh"?

——Who is not angry or sad after being deceived?

And after using so many "so" continuous advancements, I didn't see what to "so" out.

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"Chapter 26: Transferring the Tiger from the Mountain":

[This is a very new thing. Is there anything shameful thing that Xie Xiaoyu needs to hide and cannot be seen by Ding Peng? However, this also explains why Mr. Xie has to keep trouble again and again, deliberately cause trouble, and challenge it on excuses.]

[He was originally a very well-educated person, but today he became furious and started a duel after a few words with Xiaoxiang.]

[It turned out that it was all about stopping Ding Peng from entering so that Xie Xiaoyu inside had time to prepare and remove some people or things that Ding Peng could not see.]

I personally think that this is a simple explanatory form that Mr. Gu Long would not use in his later writing styles. This explanation is usually carried out in a few simple conversations.

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According to research, the ghostwriter was from Chapter 11 "The Combination of Two Swords":

[What is the world that makes men more moved than a 17-year-old girl praises the hero in her heart?]

[And this man happens to be the hero she praises.]

[What is there in the world that makes men feel more proud than the wholehearted trust of an innocent girl?]

【And she is a beautiful girl again.】

Starting from the above, I'll write for you.

These sentences do seem a bit lengthy, especially in the later period, Mr. Gu Long probably wouldn't use such "not concise" sentences.

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There are countless such things.

Many of these words, which are similar to "Ancient Dragon Wind" but not "Ancient Dragon Wind", are usually clumsy words that only authors who write about the master of Gu Long, who are often scolded as "the tiger is not a dog but a dog."

It can be roughly seen that Sima Ziyan should still have some meaning to imitate "Gu Longfeng", but the imitation is not very similar.

I always think that it doesn’t matter if I imitate Mr. Gu Long’s writing styles that are not very similar.

We are not ancient dragons, how could we be like a lot?

But I think that as long as you can try your best to respect Gu Long's characters and retain their personalities and character, you can still keep reading.

But obviously, Senior Sima Ziyan did not take this into consideration too much; he took care of the surprising plot, but did not take care of the changes in the characters.

When Ding Peng went to Divine Sword Villa, he suddenly became a "Long Aotian" character.

Of course, if we say that Ding Peng suddenly became famous, he was complacent and exaggerated, so he was the best in the world, that would be barely understandable; but what makes sense is that there has never been such a protagonist in Mr. Gu Long's writing, and the words he said are really not cute.

One person's comment was very appropriate: "In the late stage of the Full Moon Scimitar, every time I see Qingqing calling Ding Peng 'Master', I feel a little strange in my stomach."

That's true.

The connection and emotional description between the characters in the second half is very strange.

I read this book a long time ago. When I was about to start writing a new volume of "The Moon Scimitar Scroll", I thought I should read this book again; but I was very sorry that I could not finish it.

If it is in the classic "misuse of idioms", this should be considered "unbearable to read it".

I had expected such a volume very early, but I never finished it.

So, I just flipped through the original excerpts of the above and copied the original text of the page when I flipped to, hahahaha!

I also knew that Long Xiaoyun from "The Relentless Swordsman" appeared later. From this point of view, I don't think it's easy to prove the timelines of the two series, because this is just what Sima Ziyan means.

OK, I'm talking so much, not to criticize Sima Ziyan here.

I think he did not "intentionally" destroy "The Moon Scimitar". He just completed his writing work, earning money and getting royalties. He finished the work he should do, which is understandable, and there is no reason to be criticized.

——What I want to say is:

——This is very important:

Because I haven't finished watching the lower half of the full moon scimitar, I decided:

We will only follow the character settings in the first half to complete the next volume (the meaning of my explanation is: tell everyone in advance, if any readers are unwilling to accept it, they can never read it.).

I really can't take care of the contents of the second half.

The story can be unfolded, and the problem should not be big.

Hahahahahahahahahaha, just think it’s just a play and some fancy things, maybe something new can come out.
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