Chapter 6 Among the Flowers

In the current plot of "The Unparalleled God of War", there is a princess character who runs away from home from the protagonist's territory. Gao Zhan subconsciously regards this princess as Li Qian. When writing about the relationship between the protagonist and the princess, he basically wrote it into the novel according to the scenes he and Li Qian met in reality.

The emotional scenes in the novel are very smooth. The princess was driving a carriage in a small town and almost hit the protagonist. Then the protagonist accidentally saw the princess' naked body in the hot spring...

Today, the ten thousand words were completed in just two and a half hours, and it felt like it was not enough to be completed.

He suppressed his urge to continue writing, and Gao Zhan used the offline QQ invisible login to log in online while typing. At this time, it was just ten o'clock in the evening.

As soon as QQ logged into the server, a series of message prompts sounded.

Drag the mouse cursor to the small speaker that flashes constantly. In addition to the group prompt message, there is also Fang Yuan, Zhong Weimin's QQ "Snow Bright Military Bad", and a strange woman named "Mirror Flower and Water Moon".

Fang Yuan asked him mainly about the traditional version. The manuscripts from four episodes last month had been handed over. Fang Yuan told him that the manuscript had been transferred to his account, and also mentioned the market situation of "The Unparalleled God of War" in Taiwan.

"The Unparalleled God of War" is already on the Huadian list, but it is ranked at the upper and lower level. Despite this, Fang Yuan was happy to tell Gao Zhan that being on this list is an honor for all traditional Chinese novels. At the same time, he encouraged Gao Zhan, so that he could continue to work hard, strive to make this book into the top ten of the Huadian list, and enter the ranks of the god-level authors of traditional Chinese publishing.

Now the traditional Chinese book "The God of War" has been released to episode 16, and its sales are getting better and better. However, Gao Zhan received a royalty of 75 yuan for a thousand words. Because there is no royalty, no matter how much sales it is, it has nothing to do with him. He can receive an extra 18,000 yuan in traditional Chinese version every month, Gao Zhan is still quite content. After all, before opening this pit, he did not expect to be able to produce a physical product. He spent four months to episode 16 and earned 72,000 yuan. This income alone is higher than those white-collar workers who work.

Since he received the 30 traditional versions of "The Unparalleled God of War" from the sixth level, Gao Zhan has never asked Fang Yuan to ask him to bring five copies of the following episodes. He did not mention it, and Fang Yuan did not send it.

Thinking that the 16th episode was now out, Gao Zhan felt that he had to keep a set of sample books as a souvenir, so he mentioned this matter to Fang Yuan. Fang Yuan simply asked him if he was still following the previous address.

Gao Zhan will tell Fang Yuan the current address immediately.

I heard Gao Zhan say that he is in Cheung Chau now, Fang Yuan happily replied with a QQ expression, saying that he often came to Cheung Chau to do business, and next time he came, he brought the sample book behind him to Cheung Chau to him. He also joked that the mailing fee was quite high.

Gao Zhan then left his mobile phone number to Fang Yuan and asked him to call him when he came to Changzhou, so that everyone could drink together.

After finishing his chat with Fang Yuan, Gao Zhan first opened the QQ called "Mirror Flower and Water Moon", because he probably had to chat for a while if he talked to Zhong Weimin later, so he would first get the other people's affairs done and then reply to Zhong Weimin.

"Hello, who are you?" Gao Zhan said politely to the Mirage Huashuiyue.

Unexpectedly, this person is still online now and quickly replied: "Hello, Gao Zhan, I am Mr. Hu from Class 3, 2, Fengcheng No. 1 Middle School. I asked your class teacher Mr. Zhang to ask you some information about the situation of Yuandian Chinese. Do you still remember?"

Gao Zhan: "Remember, Hello, Teacher Hu. Is there anything wrong?"

Teacher Hu: "I would like to ask you what does yy mean in the current online novel? How to add the yy element to the novel?"

The evening breeze on Yuelu Mountain cannot drive away the heat of summer nights.

The seemingly prosperous lights of thousands of homes add an unbearable boredom to this midsummer night.

Of course, Gao Zhan enjoyed the coolness brought by the air conditioner and humidifier in his room, and could not experience the hatred of the heat in the hearts of the young citizens wearing shorts and shirtless in the streets and alleys outside.

No wonder Lin Xiaorou, Fisher, Han Xiaoyan and Sun Yazhi will come to 1502 at night. After all, the large space of nearly 300 square meters here is more than enough to accommodate four beautiful, sexy and charming girls. The most important thing is the 5p power cabinet air conditioner downstairs, which makes the air in the entire 1502 room comfortable as spring.

Although I am very interested in making money, in fact, it is more to prove myself. Gao Zhan is very light about money. Although the air conditioner and electricity bill must be high, the money is what we earn. We are not a slave to money and live a long life with a lot of money, which is boring.

Of course, the four girls just came to take advantage of the air conditioner. Whether they came or not, the air conditioner had to be turned on. Always adjust the indoor temperature to cool temperature. Gao Zhan didn't want to ruin Lulu and Lu Yingre. In Gao Zhan's words, money was earned, not saved. So... Money is a bastard, can we make money again after spending it? Some people heard that they earned a billionaire, but they didn't hear anyone saved a billionaire by saving it.

Of course, if you say 1,000 yuan, for the current monthly exhibition, which is more than 50,000 yuan, the electricity bill of more than a few hundred yuan a month is really negligible. If you have money, you will not improve your life. So what is the purpose of making money?

Not to mention the gossip world where women chatter downstairs, but to just talk about our Gao Zhan’s classmate, he was guiding his former teacher with a sense of accomplishment.

I didn’t have a deep impression of Gao Zhan in Class 3 and 2, Fengcheng No. 1 Middle School, who wore gold-rimmed glasses and had a very intellectual beauty. However, influenced by his class teacher Zhang Haiyang at that time, I talked with the Chinese teacher who was interested in adding bricks to the development of online novels several times.

Looking at the humble and sincere words of this teacher Hu in the QQ dialog box, Gao Zhan felt a little moved in his heart. It was the creation of online novels that changed his life and created his current new life and warm little family.

The doubts raised by Teacher Hu about the concept of "yy" are probably a difficult problem that most online writers and readers only know only a few questions.

Fortunately, Gao Zhan once asked senior writers such as Lao Jue, Emperor Sheng Ji in the writer exchange group "Study is the primary productive force", and also had his own experience and insights.

He picked up the bag of special pandas on the table, lit one, and the soft and refreshing smoke squirted into his throat, and then slowly sprayed it out of his nostrils.

Holding the cigarette at the corner of his mouth, spreading his fingers high and dancing waltz happily on the healthy plate of the notes, quickly typing out his personal understanding of the new Internet term created by the online novel "yy":

"Teacher Hu, 'yy' is the synonym for readers of online novels who take the word "生后" as the abbreviation of the first letter of the pinyin. '生后' first appeared in "Dream of Red Mansions" written by Cao Xueqin, but it was developed through current online novels, making it a unique fantasy culture.

Many people think that 'yy' is just daydreaming, which is unrealistic and thought out of nothing. This understanding is reasonable in the early stages of the development of online novels in 2003 and 2006.

However, nowadays, readers who read online novels have read more and more flirtatious, and their tastes have become more and more frivolous. If they interpret the theme of lewdness according to the early stage of "yy", they will think that it is a bragging child, and they will no longer be interested in such works.

I think that 'yy' has now become a new science and is a research topic that hundreds of thousands or even millions of online writers must explore in-depth. Life is unsatisfactory, and in the face of cruel reality, each of us is already scarred and exhausted. No one wants to make ourselves feel unhappy or depressed in online novels.

An online novel that is sought after by readers, the main line and plot of the full text must be around the eight out of ten that each of us is not satisfied with.

Everyone has a dream in their hearts, money, reputation, status, power, beauty, handsome men, famous cars, luxury houses... Didn’t it ever make the vast majority of the world salivate? Online novels came into being specifically designed to fill the empty spiritual world of most unsatisfactory people living in today’s society that advocates money and most unsatisfactory people.

To put it bluntly, this so-called yy is something that everyone dreams of, but cannot be realized, but is very eager to achieve or obtain. It is manifested in novels. When readers read, they can taste the pleasure of getting what they want by substituting them. The better the book, the stronger the sense of substitution, the higher the excitement and passion. Good books can really be drunk.

Therefore, I think 'yy' should not be just exaggerating and silly thinking. The novel originates from life and ends in life. 'yy' should be to amplify the unsatisfactoryness in our lives a little bit, and carry out reasonable artistic processing. Its core purpose is to make readers feel comfortable, comfortable, happy, and happy after reading it. Its core purpose is to make readers feel comfortable and happy after reading it. If you can do this, it must be a Haopiao Astronomy novel that is popular and sought after by readers and engage in commercial creation. Making money is the first goal. Then, be sure to write from the perspective of the reader when designing the plot and telling the story, rather than writing out the personal opinions you want to express in your mind.

We write online novels for readers, not for us to appreciate. We feel that it is useless to be satisfied. Only by gaining the resonance of readers, satisfying their reading needs, and achieving the pleasure of reading can we have a place in the army of millions of online writers.”

Gao Zhan's typing speed was nearly 100 in a minute, which was quite fast. He divided the yy theorem he understood into four sections and typed it out and sent it to "Mirror Flower and Yueshui".

On the other end of the Internet, in a study room in a community in Fengcheng, a sexy woman in silk pajamas sat at the computer desk with long hair, looking at the four passages in the QQ dialog box that maximizes the window on the LCD screen, and nodding her head gently while watching. If Gao Zhan videos her, he will definitely find that the temperament and charm of this teacher Hu at home are completely different from those in school.

When she was in school, she always looked cold and serious, and she was very conservative in clothes, with no curves at all, and even felt a little rich.

But in fact, it was a completely illusion caused by clothing. A loose coat, supported by a breast, round and plump buttocks, was enough to change everything and give anyone the illusion of getting rich.

She is a typical "hung fat swallow thin" kind of plump woman. She looks like she is in her thirties at first glance, but when she looks closely, she seems to be at most twenty-six or seven years old, just like a ripe water-tight peach.

In the aesthetics of Chinese people, her figure may be a little overwhelmed, her breasts are too big and her hips are too plump, which is not very consistent with the aesthetic concept of the East, especially the huge pair on her chest, which will definitely make people feel embarrassed and ashamed when walking out.

"Thank you, Gao Zhan, I am a teacher at school, but you are my teacher in the creation of online novels." Jinghua Shuiyue also quickly typed a line of words into the QQ dialog box and sent it over.

Gao Zhan: "Teacher Hu, you are polite. A little shallow opinion is for reference only."

Mirror Flower and Water Moon: "If you walk three people, you will definitely have my teacher. The ancients are really not bullying me. Gao Zhan, thank you again for specifically solving my doubts. I heard that you have been admitted to Hunan University and have time to go back to Fengcheng. Remember to come to your alma mater to check out!"

Gao Zhan: "It must be. Teacher Hu, if nothing happens, I have to go away and there are some other things to deal with."

Jinghua Shuiyue: "If you have to be busy in advance, I have to go, goodbye."

After closing the dialog box of Mirror Flower and Water Moon, Gao Zhan skillfully pressed the ctrlaltz key with his left hand, causing Zhong Weimin's QQ number "Snow Bright Military Badge" to pop out.

"Xiao Gao, are you there?" "Damn, it's not online yet!" "Come on, I'm!" Zhong Weimin left three sentences for Gao Zhan, and the time of the last sentence was half an hour ago.

Gao Zhan quickly typed out a line of words and sent it over: "Brother Zhong, I'm sorry, something happened tonight, it's a bit late to go online, are you still there?"

Five seconds later, the QQ image was set to a small icon with a triangular military stalk flashed.

Snow-liang Junjian: "Damn, you guy finally climbed up. I thought you would have to have sex with your girlfriend tonight and be dead."

Gao Zhan: "Damn, don't curse me like this!"

Xueliang's military spear: "Old man, I write Piaotian's novels. You kid is now a god-level writer. Hurry up and tell me how to yy online novels are and what routines are there for yy."

Seeing Zhong Weimin’s problem, Gao Zhan was happy and immediately changed the chat record with Jing Hua Shuiyue, copied and pasted the original text of the four passages sent to Jing Hua Shuiyue, and only changed the first name and sent it to Zhong Weimin.

Snow-liang's military baton: "I'm silly, are you typing so fast?"

Gao Zhan: "Hehe, you are lucky. I'm discussing this issue with people recently. So it's ready-made."

The sharp military sect returned with a "victory" QQ expression.

Gao Zhan didn't care whether Zhong Weimin had digested the content of the four passages just now, and began to quickly type out lines of words into the dialog box:

"As for the yy routine, according to my understanding, I think so. First of all, it is comparison, refers to the plot and plot, before, after, strength, contrast, up and down gap, being compared, being bullied and bullied, turning over, which is shocking;

The second is conflict, which refers to the protagonist's opponent, the outside world, and even with yourself;

Then it is to write down the protagonist's pursuit, purpose and desire;

Design suspense after suspense, including difficulties, disasters, conflicts, dangers, results, expectations, worries, curiosity, speculation, twists, accidents, etc., according to the writer's jargon, it is called digging a hole;

The plot design should make readers, or the supporting characters in the book, feel unexpected;

Highlight the various difficulties encountered by the protagonist, including danger, importance, value, small or small opportunities, etc.;

Highlight the protagonist's personal abilities, courage, means, backer, strength, perseverance, advantage, credibility, uniqueness and preciousness, intelligence, courage, cunning, bloodyness, generousness and other personalities and styles;

The plot development is best to go against the current, with a little mysterious color;

Don’t let the protagonist do things that are not good for him. If you do good things, you should leave a name. Even if you don’t deliberately leave a name, you must use other channels to let the beneficiaries know as soon as possible. Otherwise, the readers will feel frustrated and have different degrees of depression. With this emotion, you cannot continue reading in a benign manner;

The protagonist must make the readers or supporting characters admire, trust, convince, excited, happy, admire, admire, hope to make friends or even follow him, cheer for him, expect, worry, excitement, sad, proud, proud, touched, or see his own shadow. Only in this way can the whole book be enhanced. The stronger the sense of substitution, the more successful the certificate is;

Let readers always look forward to it during the reading process, which includes the growth of the protagonist, revealing puzzles, breaking through, gaining abilities and benefits, helping others, harming others, reunite, and using their abilities to pretend to be a pig and eat a tiger, which is commonly known as pretending to be a b, and doing things that others dare not or cannot do;

It is best for each chapter to have a compelling, association or stimulating title, but the content of your entire chapter must be written closely around this topic, just like the central idea we want to express when writing an essay;

The main plot or thing can be rendered through several pictures, which is also the montage technique in the movie to convert the camera. Pay attention to comparison and rendering and description. The words said by others are more shocking and credible, and the more people it affects, the better.

The protagonist must have enviable luck, power, happiness, popularity (communication ability), and the loyalty and ability of the protagonist, to give readers expectations and yearning. Without characteristics, there will be no vitality;

Let the protagonist have abilities, things, or abilities that others do not have, or abilities that are more skillful than others, and the most important thing to pretend to be a pig, so that others can ask for him or have the ability to help others; let the protagonist unintentionally own or possess strength, power, prestige, wealth, fame, power, admirers, admirers, values, influences, rare items, etc. "The above comprehensive. This is the so-called gold finger setting.

Finally, Gao Zhan said: "These are some of my personal ideas and opinions. They are not comprehensive and not too systematic. Just use them as references, so don't copy them."

Xueliang's military spear: "Damn it, now I can see that your kid is really fucking fast. I copied all the things you said to a word document and slowly digest them."

Gao Zhan: "Hehe, Ma.com, although speed may not be successful, it is certain that you cannot succeed without speed. This is the basic skill!"

Snow-liang's military baton: "What aspects should I pay attention to when I travel through World War II?"

Gao Zhan thought for a while and replied: "I am not very good at historical and military affairs, but I think it will be the same as the most. Based on the historical and military works I have seen, the golden finger is the memory and knowledge brought by the protagonist through time, but it is best not to be too exaggerated. For example, the protagonist I set was a battalion-level officer in reality. When traveling to the early Republic of China, all the equipment or civilian products invented and manufactured by the protagonist must meet the existing technological and industrial standards of that era. If cruise missiles and satellites were created in World War II, it would be a bit too exaggerated."

Snow-bright military spear: "Well, I understand bird, brother, thank you, I won't disturb your sexual life. Be careful! Haha!"

Gao Zhan returned to his BS QQ expression and ended his first online exchange with Zhong Weimin. Looking at the sky outside, it was already very late. After washing it, Gao Zhan returned to the bedroom, hugged the fragrant Lu Ying, and fell asleep beautifully.

At six o'clock in the morning, the biological clock woke Gao Zhan up from his dream on time, gently lowered Lu Ying's jade arm on his chest, and tiptoed to slowly move his body out of bed, fearing that Lu Ying, who had a happy smile on his face, was still awakened.

Wear a camouflage sweatshirt with round neck, put on grass-green shorts that are the same as the sweatshirt fabric, and walked downstairs lightly.

In the living room, Fisher, Han Xiaoyan and Sun Yazhi were wearing sexy nightgowns and slept a little exposed on the carpet on the wooden floor in front of the sofa. It seemed that it was Lin Xiaorou and Li Qian's turn to sleep together last night, so only these three beauties were playing on the floor in the living room.

Gao Zhan smiled bitterly and shook his head, carefully changed into sneakers in front of the shoe rack, then gently pulled to the living room door, closed it gently, and let out a long breath, then trotted down the stairs.

He ran to the top of Yuelu Mountain, found a pine forest without anyone, and carefully practiced the orthodox army that Wu Yi taught him with one move.

When I came back from morning exercise, the women at home were already getting up and washing and dressing up.

When I saw Gao Zhan enter the door, I didn't think anything was strange. I was very casual and greeted him naturally. Then I went back to the 1503 they rented, changing clothes and preparing to go to school without anyone else.

After eating the breakfast made by Bai Lu, everyone carried their own schoolbags and stood in the elevator together waiting for the elevator.

"Husband, are you officially going to school today?" Bai Lu asked in a soft voice, holding Gao Zhan's arm.
Chapter completed!