Chapter 399. What an iron man! (4000 words)(2/2)
Higashinoji asked her to draw the plot of Yusuke Kobayashi when he visited Sabukako's house.
And the other party did not disappoint him.
There is not much damage to the painting, and the use of colors and shadows are also very particular.
It's just that the storyboard is somewhat imitating Higashinoji.
But this is not a big deal.
Creation starts with imitation.
Even Yusaki Nakano, who brought the original manuscript, looked proud with a look of smugness, feeling that he had finally fulfilled Higashinoji's request this time.
but...
"There are still many problems." Higashinoji first praised and then added.
"There is still a problem?"
Nakano Yusaki couldn't help scratching his scalp as he heard Hitomiji's words, widened his eyes, and felt a little unhappy: "What's wrong with it again? Teacher Hitomi? I don't think..."
"You have left too much in writing."
Before Nakano Yusaki finished speaking, Higashinoji had already spoken.
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Then he pointed at one of the frames on the original manuscript of the comic.
The entire storyboard was all written by Akisaki Nakano.
I saw that it said, "The day in early summer seems to be very long. When Kobayashi Shunsuke finished his school work and was about to go home, the sky was not as bright as the sun was about to set.'
This long paragraph is not accompanied by any picture, it is just a simple text description.
Yusuke Kobayashi is the person who is secretly in love with Grudges in "Grudges", and is also one of the most critical figures in "Grudges" by Grudges. It is not a big problem to introduce him to him.
but--
Higashinoji gently clicked the desktop and explained:
"Readers are reading comics, not novels, or short dramas. You either give up the description of this passage or draw it, instead of expressing it in a long paragraph of text like this. This affects the impression."
This is a common mistake made by newcomer comics.
There are too many blank spaces in the text.
It’s like watching works like “One Piece”, “Naruto” or “Dragon Ball”.
If there is a form that must be expressed in text blank, it must be a short sentence or a few bytes.
And it is absolutely impossible to squeeze in a whole piece of words.
This affects the overall view too much.
Listening to Higashinoji's explanation, Yuki Nakano also opened his mouth, and for a moment he could not think of anything to refute.
"Let me do this, I'll draw this plot to show you."
Higashinoji did not continue to let Akisaki Nakano continue to draw, but asked her to sit down and wait for herself to finish the plot demonstration of "The Curse".
He pinched the pen and let out a sigh, then smiled and shook his head, muttering to himself: "I haven't painted such a horror comic for a long time."
His painter has made great progress now, which is much better than in the previous period of "Midnight Bell".
Therefore, he rarely touches the theme of horror comics.
After all, when he painted this thing, he felt a little worried.
Higashinoji muttered in his heart, but his subordinates did not stop.
He skillfully used G-pen and easily drew the storyboard he wanted.
The whole process can be said to be familiar with the road, and there is no pause at all.
Nakano Yusaki was stunned when he watched from the side.
Teacher Higashino is too silky, right?
It's completely different from when I painted it before.
It feels like a printer, and the manuscript is spit out in an orderly manner.
Humans can't do this, right?
She was stunned as she looked at it. When she came to her senses, a few original manuscripts were drawn neatly.
"It's OK."
Higashinoji handed a few original manuscripts to Arisaki Nakano: "I'll go outside and take some fresh air, and take a break, just take a look."
He didn't care that Nakano Yusaki was stunned, so he handed the original manuscript to the other party and stood up.
But before she could start to turn over, Qianxia on the other side saw Higashiji leaving, and immediately jumped over and shouted, "Let me see it too!"
This is a horror comic drawn by the author of "Midnight Bell" after three years!
No painter can resist this temptation.
The thousand summer capitals on the mountain have already made up their minds.
Even if she was scared to death after reading it today, she would have to look at the actual level of Higashinoshi horror comics.
The two little girls read the "Gentleman" that Higashinoji had just drawn so curiously, and began to turn page by page...
Yusuke Kobayashi is a teacher at a nearby primary school. Today he made an appointment to visit Sahiro's house for a home visit.
Can...
"What's going on?"
Table lamps with lampshades, chairs and tables are piled up in a mess, broken vases and bowls, broken sinks, broken refrigerated fresh-keeping boxes with broken lids, broken potted plants and cultivation boxes, books, notebooks and photo books...
The interior of the room, which was burned red by the sunset, was messy.
Everything is chilling...
When Yusuke Kobayashi stood in such a place, he felt chills inexplicably.
It seems that the feelings of the characters in the work are transmitted to oneself.
Even Chiashi Yamakura and Yusaki Nakano who were watching this work couldn't help but shrink their heads and swallowed.
A sense of indescribable fear came from my heart.
Is this Higashinoji's strength?
There was no ghost in the comics yet, and no ghosts were seen--
Just the atmosphere of the room.
Chapter completed!