Zhang Tan: "There are three shortcomings."

Jiang Rong glanced at Zhang Tan proudly. She was used to Zhang Tan's habits and wondered if he had obsessive-compulsive disorder. Every time he evaluated the script, he listed three shortcomings.

As for the advantages, there may be one or many, but the disadvantages are always three.

Zhang Tan continued: "First, the whole story is a bit boring, lacks novelty, and is a bit boring..."

After the lecture, team leader Liu asked again: "Can you tell us how to solve these three shortcomings?"

Zhang Tan: "As for the first point, I think we can add a supporting role, whose main function is to activate the atmosphere, such as a pet..."

There are many such examples, such as the Mushu Dragon in the cartoon "Mulan". The addition of this small character made the cartoon much more lively and interesting.

Many animations have such a setting, not only animations, but also live-action movies and TV shows. They often set up a funny comparison next to the protagonist to liven up the atmosphere, such as the fat man in "Tomb Raiders".

After listening, the team leader Liu nodded without comment and asked three colleagues who also received the script to express their opinions.

After everyone finished speaking, he said: "I will give all your feedback to the crew."

"The crew?" someone asked curiously.

Old Liu nodded and said: "This is actually a project that the factory is preparing to start. This script was written by the screenwriters in the factory. They came here specifically to listen to our opinions and suggestions. What you said is good."

Everyone was a little excited. This was the first time that a script they had evaluated was put into use.
Chapter completed!