On the shelf testimonials and summary and outlook (readers must see!)
Coincidentally, this month is the college entrance examination this year. For Zhaoling, nearly two free public period updates are a long assessment. On June 14, that is, tomorrow Friday, it is officially launched at 12 noon, which means that the results of this book are about to be released, and the first time is very important.
Zhao Ling is now nervous and expecting, and has thousands of words in his heart. He has also considered writing some words to be miserable and want to subscribe. But I can forget it. As long as I develop VIP paid readers, and if I like this story, I will definitely subscribe. I have been opening the site for 10 or 20 years. The readers who read books are basically old bookworms. I probably have read a lot of comments on the shelves. Zhao Ling doesn’t write any fancy things, and writes out the thoughts in my heart simply.
Zhaoling believes that readers’ eyes are all bright. As long as they write chapter stories that satisfy readers, they will subscribe and buy.
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I said it was put on the shelves by the title. Next is the comments. First, I would like to thank all readers who collected, voted for recommendations and rewarded during the free public period.
As of the time of the release of the shelves, the main data of "Black Technology Master" has been updated in 124 chapters, a total of about 330,000 words, a total of about 100,000 recommended votes, and a total of about 37,000 collections. As of the time of the update of this chapter, 197 readers have rewarded this book during the free period, with different reward quotas. The highest "Brother Dangwu" has accumulated 15,000 starting coins and the lowest reward quotas.
These data are not cold, they all represent the love of every reader. Chao Ji thanks every reader who has collected, voted for recommendations, rewarded or other support for this book.
This is the greatest support and affirmation of Zhaoling. Zhaoling has submitted the test paper and the first grade of tomorrow will be evaluated and scored by every reader.
Finally, I would like to thank the China Literature Group platform and the editor-in-chief Yuanzheng.
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Next is the update issue after it is released. If there were no troubles in the platform's rectification some time ago, Zhao Ling probably had hundreds of chapters of manuscripts left. During that time, he was really worried and wrote the articles crazy, and the manuscripts were also greatly revised. At least thirty chapters were deleted. He felt so distressed that he was simply doubting his life.
But there is no way, river crabs are force majeure.
Not only was it impossible to save the manuscript during that period, but there were also a lot of deletes and the plot was adjusted. The updated chapters also went back to the major changes, and even "The Umbrella's Travels" was no longer available. What a beautiful lyrical prose, everyone said, "Cough cough cough cough...
Back to the point, Zhao Ling still has some manuscripts, so he thought that there would definitely be a wave of explosion on the day he was put on the shelves.
The minimum 7 update will be guaranteed tomorrow. Don’t get me wrong. There is nothing to hint. I just like the number 7 more...
Then there are other update rules. Zhaoling decided to include all data in the update sequence, so that it is easy to trigger the update number. At the same time, everyone is getting high in fire. You can look at the data supervision. After reaching the data, the update will be added based on the guaranteed 2 updates the next day.
First of all, the first order is the first order and the first order is 3,000 plus 1 update. On this basis, every cumulative 1 update is added to 1 update, and so on, so everyone must subscribe, especially the first order. Zhaoling will report to everyone the next day when the first order is released, and will also report to everyone in the group. You can also search for the Qidian Data Network on Du Niang and enter the book title to view the first order score of this book. This is third-party data, not very accurate, and it is generally inflated than the real score, but it is not much different.
The next update rule is to always be valid, the data meets the update requirements and be updated the next day.
as follows:
1 Recommended votes for additional updates: In the future, the number of recommended votes accumulated per week will be 10,000, plus 1 updates, and so on. If the data trends like this week can be maintained every week after it is put on the shelves, the recommended votes can be updated for four or five chapters every week. The key is that the recommended votes are not expensive and will be refreshed every day, so please continue to vote for this book.
February ticket updates: every 200 votes are increased, and so on, no cap will be allowed.
3 Rewards and updates: One hall master adds 1 update, another alliance leader adds 5 updates, as for Bai Yinmeng, the hall master is all hanging... Regarding the rewards and updates, it is shameful that Zhao Ling is not sure about his appeal. He originally didn't want to set this rule, but if there is a large reward, he has to update it. In short, it depends on fate. I have also thought about plans such as everyone's fireworks and crowdfunding alliances, but I still have no idea about his appeal, it depends on fate.
Regarding the update after it is released, this is the case for the time being. If you have better ideas, you can go to the group to chat or leave a message in the app book review area.
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Returning to this book, the title has already been summarized, which is to summarize the content of the free period of this book.
The current results of this book exceed Zhaoling’s two books. I am very happy, which shows that there has been progress.
However, I still found many problems. The disadvantage of the previous two books is that the characters are weak. After finishing the book, I thought for a long time and found that when I was writing in the middle and late stages, the protagonist lacked opponents and caused no fierce conflicts. The plot was as plain as water, without ups and downs, and it gave up over time.
To put it bluntly, it is because the portrayal of the villain is not in place. If the male protagonist has no opponent, there will be no goal to surpass, which leads to the male protagonist being invincible in the middle and late stages, especially in the later stages. Then readers continue to disappear and their grades decline.
These are all a summary of some of the shortcomings of the previous book.
Therefore, in the book "Black Technology Master", Zhao Ling's most eager progress is to be able to surpass the previous book in character portrayal, so that the shortcomings of the previous book should not happen in this book.
However, it is precisely because of trying to invest more energy in character portrayal that the content updated during the public has become defective. Typically, the role of "Mona" of the male lead Gu Cheng has been criticized for being more common.
Secondly, the plots of "Mona" and "e-sports" are mostly unpleasant.
Here, Zhao Ling would like to thank everyone for their comments and comments. It is precisely because of these meaningful comment interactions that we can quickly see the shortcomings, so that we can make timely adjustments in the early stages, reduce content in this area, and strive to be perfect.
When opening the book, the character Mengna was actually arranged to appear in the first five chapters, but after thinking about it, this character will only play a role in the middle and late stages. It is obviously not advisable to have too many characters in the early stage. Too complicated preparations are laid out, and Zhao Ling does not have such strong writing skills.
Then you should play to your strengths and avoid your weaknesses. The main line in the early stage must be clear, because readers will not have so much patience to read you to lay the groundwork. There are too many early appearances and readers can't remember them, which will waste the precious word count of the previous chapters and the golden time for readers to read.
Therefore, the role of "Mona" was adjusted to more than twenty chapters and appeared. I vaguely remember that I saw a reader commenting on the chapter and saying, "The pig's trotter's sister is so miserable, she appeared so late" 2333...
But even if there are some adjustments, the problem still exposed in the subsequent updates, that is, the plot of "e-sports" almost messed up the main and secondary. Fortunately, the readers immediately reported the feedback and pulled it back. They decisively deleted the plot of the following seven or eight chapters of the manuscript about the e-sports competition description and adjusted it in time, otherwise they would be happy. Thank you again for being there.
You may have guessed that Zhao Ling may be affected by the shortcomings of the previous book and always wants to portray more characters in subjective consciousness, so she unconsciously arranges some prelude plots for the role of "Mona" to serve the role of "Mona".
The result may be counterproductive. The writing did not satisfy everyone, and it received most criticisms. However, because of these criticisms, Zhao Lingeng adjusted it in time. Although it was reluctant to leave the large-scale deletion of the manuscript, for the sake of the overall structure of the book, it was broken if it was broken.
During this period, a single chapter "asking for help" was a huge help from readers' messages.
Zhao Ling collided with inspiration from it, and now he has found a better follow-up arrangement for the character "Mona". It can be well combined with the main plot, that is, "black technology". As for the specifics, there will be no spoilers.
The content of 330,000 words during the public period should be the above. There must be still some problems that have not been discovered. There are no doubt about this. If you find it, please point it out.
But Zhao Ling has no choice but to some force majeure problems. After all, river crabs are majeure. For example, this seemingly obvious bug is that the protagonist is becoming more and more important. People above don’t come out to meet to show their importance to the protagonist.
After meeting you, the river crab will come to see you soon...
The above is the summary of this book’s public period.
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Finally, let’s talk about the outlook.
Readers in the group may know that, yes, Zhao Ling actually began to conceive and gradually improve the next book since the book was updated.
The following book is a sequel to "Black Technology Master", which uses a worldview and background structure.
After completing the update task of "Black Technology Big Brother", Zhaoling will basically spend about an hour or a half to conceive a new sequel book every day.
Let’s start with “Black Technology Big Brother”. The name is indeed a bit “silly”. There is no way, and all good book titles have been occupied, but this is not the point.
Old readers who followed the previous two books should know, or readers who read black technology articles should also know that as long as this type of novel is published on Earth, nine out of ten will collapse.
"Super Technology Giant" collapsed when it came out of the earth, which also led to "Almighty Technology Giant" staying on the earth due to sequelae, and ending it in a hurry when it flew out.
What is certain now in "Black Technology Big Brother" is that it will definitely move towards the sea of stars in the later stage. With the previous two lessons, Zhao Ling thinks that he has prepared very well and has confidence this time.
But he is still very cautious, and it is precisely because of this that there will be a sequel to the Big Man.
We will wait and see if we can write what Zhao Ling thinks, but Zhao Ling's heart really wants to start with the book "Big Crown" and write a story about a grand background, starting from the cradle of the earth and moving towards the sea of stars. During this period, in mutual disputes and civilization progress, human civilization has been upgraded from planetary civilization to stellar civilization.
Therefore, "Black Technology Giant" is about to come out of the earth, but the main framework of the entire world background is still unfolding in the solar system, mainly to walk out of the earth's cradle and enter the early pioneering period of the universe's great voyage. The story of contradictions, conflicts and disputes within human beings, and the brains during the period are related to black technology.
Although it is jumping from the framework of the earth to the framework of the solar system, I borrowed a sentence from Liu's novel "The Three-Body Problem" here. I don't remember it specifically. It roughly means "the fish that go ashore is no longer a fish, and the human beings entering space are no longer a human being."
Therefore, from the expansion of the earth to the entire solar system, the environment has undergone earth-shaking changes for humans, and everything in the future is unknown to humans. For example, the Trinity nuclear strike can become an existence that maintains mutual restraint in the Earth era because it has a strong deterrent effect and can ensure mutual destruction, thus becoming a balanced product that both sides dare not launch a full-scale war at will.
But what about the space age? I am on Earth and you are on Mars. This deterrence and balance effect may disappear. What will you discover in that context...?
So these are the things that make Zhao Ling excited. It can be said that this story is the longest conceived by Zhao Ling and the most fully prepared. It can even be said that the first two books were used as pathfinding stones for this. After all, they all died on the road, so continue to sprint this time!
Zhao Ling knows that everyone may think that this worldview pattern is too small, and it is still in the solar system in the later stages. Understand, after all, there are so many books at the starting point, and all readers are basically old bookworms. The most amazing background at present is the multidimensional universe background. If you don’t create a multiverse, don’t mean that the background is grand. At least it is also a known universe. The Milky Way is still a starting point. The solar system is just a novice village... (*^▽^*)
Well, Zhao Ling also admits that it is not ruled out the sequelae caused by gging the Earth before, but it may not be a bad thing.
I wonder if you have the same feeling, that is, the common black technology articles have always been limited to the earth, and it does seem too small to have a blind appearance, but blindly leaving the earth to the universe to roam, it is easy to collapse, because everything is unfamiliar, the sense of substitution suddenly drops, and fewer people chase after it. Another person who can write is too few, Zhao Ling does not think he is the small group of authors.
But what if it is enlarged to the solar system? Do you think it is acceptable? At least eight major planets, major major satellites, and asteroid belts are known to everyone.
At the same time, the pattern is no longer limited to a small planet, and it has entered the space age. If these planets expand their territory and colonize, their sense of substitution will not drop sharply.
After everyone generally accepted the background structure in the book and became familiar with it, they followed up with the sequel, moving from space to deep space...
Based on this consideration, Zhao Ling decided to position the world view pattern of "Black Technology Giant" in the solar system, and used this as the tone to tell the story of human civilization from planetary civilization to stellar civilization. The specific plot will not be spoiled, so stay tuned!
If nothing unexpected happens, the content planned in my heart will be fully presented. The length of "Black Technology Big Brother" is about 3 million to 3.5 million words, so Zhaoling has to say here that everyone's subscription support is extremely critical, which largely determines where this story will lead in the end, which is very, very important.
After all, the real problems cannot be avoided. Zhao Ling himself has to rely on royalties to make a living, and he has parents and... tmd has not been released yet (o(╥﹏╥)o), the heart-wrenching EB needs to make money and make a living. These are all very realistic and must-face problems, and they are full of unpredictability.
Return to the main topic and tell the story itself.
After reading this, I have already understood the overall framework of "Black Technology Big Brothers". Zhao Ling feels that we cannot explain it in detail. If we talk about it in detail, it will be a serious spoiler.
The reason why I mentioned the framework of "Black Technology Big Brother" before it was released is to tell everyone what kind of story Zhao Ling wants to write, and whether this story happens to be yours.
So it is very clear to every reader now. If this is the story you are really looking forward to, then you can subscribe with confidence in the next step. Listen to Zhaoling telling this story in a casual manner, and you won’t disappoint you in the end.
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The sequel is mentioned briefly at the end of the last chapter. The title of the book is to be determined. The sequel is still slowly conceived at night. After the big guy finishes the book, the sequel will be uploaded without any gaps. If nothing unexpected happens, it will be next year, so it will be early.
So even if you only spend one hour or even half an hour every day to conceive, it is completely sufficient. In short, there is no rush and stability is the bottom line. The focus now is absolutely undoubtedly the big crocodile. Everything that the big crocodile doesn’t write well is false.
Just as the sequel, the book Dazhe can be said to be enriching the world view and background structure for the sequel, which is equivalent to having a complete and solid underlying structure. The major events that occur in the book Dazhe will also affect the background world view pattern of the sequel. Since it is a story in the background of the same world, the impact is actually mutual. Sometimes, the inspiration for the conception of the sequel can also drive the improvement of the later outline of the sequel, and the benefits can be felt.
At present, a few main characters in the sequel have been identified, the new core settings and the rough worldview background framework have been further refined.
And the chronicles that are compiling the world background, that is, the Spring and Autumn styles edit and record some major historical events in the order of timelines. In the end, only 20% of the sequel will be introduced, and the others will be ignored. The ultimate purpose of the chronicles is still to better serve the plot itself, and the conflict with the plot will naturally be decisively cut off.
Anyway, there is time to slowly conceive and improve it slowly. It is too early to talk about the sequel, so please look forward to it.
Let’s just say this. The comments on the shelves are long enough. Zhao Ling doesn’t know how many people have seen this seriously. I’ve read it and said it in this paragraph?
Finally, everyone remember to vote. The rules for adding updates start now. The minimum guaranteed 7 updates will be available at 12 noon tomorrow. This week's recommended votes are almost 13,000, and the standard is met. The 8 updates will be locked in advance tomorrow. The 15,000 updates will be available before 12 o'clock on the day of the launch. Other data such as rewards will be measured according to the above standards. If you meet the standards, you will be available.
Chapter completed!